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16chapters but the MC is still trash with no cultivation . he can make pills that is useful why not use them ? bad. hmmm. so bad. . you should have made the MC cultivation around chapters 5+.. NO cultivation = improvement. you are just wasting chapters to make filler or trash story

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When I first started to read this novel, I was really enjoying it. The premise was overused but not too over the top. There were a lot of regular cliche's like "trash young master" and "reincarnated with past memories", but overall, it had a nice feel to it. The thing that sunk the ship for me was how cringe-worthy all the interactions are. It's like this author decided to turn everything into a 70's slapstick comedy show. I feel like I'm watching Full House when I read this. Every single thing that can be misunderstood, will be misunderstood. Everything that can go wrong, will go wrong. It's so bad to the point that you have to be on guard when the MC even walks out his bedroom casually for a ****** nonsensical reason, **** can and will hit the fan at the drop of a hat with little to no reason or cause. It's a huge turn-off. Obviously, a lot of time and effort went into planning the novel out, it has a clear story, that, while not very unique, also isn't bad. The problem is that the feel of the story is so far on the opposite end of serious that none of it has any actual weight, the entire novel feels like a joke, and that's because every single action made is so completely ridiculous that the only quality left is humor. I read novels like Perfect World and Gate of God, these novels have shameless main characters, they're shameless in retarded ways where you can't be mad at them because they're a combination of stupid, uninformed, arrogant, and aloof all the same time. It's annoying and stupid to read about their interactions with people and the misunderstandings that happen for no other reason but to satisfy the authors retarded desire to add random **** into their novel. This novel is exactly like that, except it's not just the main character, it's the entire fucking story. It doesn't matter if the MC can blow up mountains with a single punch, or dodge sword skills that would have Kakashi tongue-tied. If the author want's the mc to slip on a banana peel, the mc will slip on that banana peel. I find this incredibly annoying and unentertaining to read. Of course, slight comedic relief and humor are needed, but when you go THIS far, it's ridiculous. I understand that I've used some far-reaching analogies here, but I feel like most people can understand what I'm getting at. Overall, I'm really disappointed. It seems like every novel is either super ******** bloodthirsty where the MC pulls up the roots whenever someone even looks at him funny, or the novel is so slapstick ridiculous that it's not entertaining to read. Why can't authors find a balance between light-hearted humorous interactions and cold-blooded awesomeness? All of that being said, this is an original novel and even though I am severely disappointed with the story, it's still knees and waist above every other original novel. There is no comparison. The grammar is awesome, I have no trouble reading any of it, which is a very high compliment considering some of my previous reviews. There's no long-winded ancient Chinese mystical nonsense about random religions or practices, so that's always a plus. If we go by grammar, sentence structure and such, it's a 10/10 hands down for me. If we go by story, it's a solid 4/10, I'm very disappointed with how much lack of seriousness went into this novel.

Tch foolish mortals, what's wrong with 16 chapters with no cultivation thing? It's just sixteen, ah! Our Little Che from Against The Gods doesn't even start cultivating for more than 50 chapters and hes still doing just fine. No rush...

I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!

I don’t get the reviews criticizing the MC for not cultivating 16 chapters in. I mean it’s only 16 chapters. Within 16 standard length chapters, you can either establish MC personality and background or have the MC be a monotone bore with no real reasoning but already OP. A well developed MC is better. Overall, this story is starting with an interesting concept. There is an opportunity for more exploration on the psychological development of the MC, as it’s brushed on, but so far, not integrated to the level it could be.

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