Review Detail of Teung in Reincarnation of The Human Empyrean

Item: Reincarnation of The Human Empyrean
Rating: 2.4

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TeungLv126yrTeung

This is way too incoherent to read properly, as in the grammar and spacing of the novel is simply really really bad. Please fix the paragraphing and get a proof reader and the story might actually be enjoyable.

Reincarnation of The Human Empyrean

Dyingreality

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DyingrealityAuthorDyingreality

i know i was at first using a normal writing app so the first 4 chapters like this , now i`am using a new program on PC , and about the proofreader i hope i can find someone , as you can see i just started writing , this is my first time writing in English , so please bear with it .

6yr

TeungLv12Teung

Looking forward to your improvements!

6yr

DyingrealityAuthorDyingreality

Thank you , I Hope you Can Read The Edited Chapters Again .

Teung:Looking forward to your improvements!

6yr