Writing Quality 3.5/5 - its decently written enough that it can be considered to be better than most fics and can easily be read without much complaint. still not perfect though Stability of updates 4/5 - pretty decent chapter length as well as amount. Story development 2/5 - nothing pretty much changed in the events, only added a little bit of romance and made the mc stronger which cant be considered as anything too exciting Character design 2/5 - 2 is a decent score for a fanfic, i say decent as the author portrays the characters pretty well but not exactly a perfect, and there are too little OC's to give it an additional star Wrodl Background 5/5 - well i found no errors in the WB cause MBHA world is pretty muched established already. all in all.. this is a pretty decent fic.... not the type of fic to get crazy about but is still pretty good.... made a review before dropping this as for me its too generic a fic and doesnt really offer up anything groundbreaking for me to love it....
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