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I really like how it is written, the rhythm of the events seems good and the romance is good enough to die, although you also do not need to rewrite your story when you reach it, the world is big enough to invent it
My Hero Academia - Going Back to the Start
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The rewrite will be more because of adding in extra detail to certain situation, including other POVs and/or never actually making it a single POV even during a specific scene. The last being something along the lines of being able to know everything that goes on in the classroom, for example what the students are all thinking (if it's important.)