webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of SnoozySloth in My Hero Academia - Going Back to the Start

Review detail

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv55yrSnoozySloth

I've been reading a few fanfics in my spare time when I can. I've read several Naruto/Dragonball fanfics in the top 100 and some on other sites. Honestly, the ones on this site were pretty damn bad. The only good one I've read on this site so far was by Myumara, who seems to have disappeared off the scene. I'm happy to say this is the 2nd good fanfic I've read on this site. Let's talk about why. Note: I give 5 star review despite the scores written below. Writing Quality: 4/5. It's unbelievable how hard it is to find a fanfic with good grammar. The author slipped a bit for a few chapters, but quickly recovered back to high-quality grammar. Also, the author isn't lazy. I read a fanfic recently where a fifth of every chapter was just listing the MCs stats on a system. Completely ruined the otherwise okay story for me on that one. Thankfully, the author of this book takes his time writing the actual story instead of pointless nonsense. Note for the author: Please learn the difference between your and you're. It's your most common mistake even though you're a fairly good writer. Stability of Updates: 5/5. They're frequent. Story Development: 5/5. We've got a mystery on our hands over Deku's new quirk. It's interesting and the author isn't sticking to the original plot like a mindless zombie. So many fanfics seem to do that. Good job author! Its a unique story with it's own potential! Character Design 5/5 and 0/5. The author develops his characters well. Deku is maturing and growing as a person. Bakugo grew up very differently due to the new Deku. So, 5/5 on those parts. Why the 0/5? I'm a Deku x Uraraka shipper! What have you done you monster! This is the 1 ship that should never break! Lol. I'm joking (I'm not joking!). World Background 5/5 and 2.5/5: The world building that the author does is done very well. So 5/5 there. The 2nd lower score is because you probably need to be an MHA fan to enjoy this. I don't think I could understand it very well without that background knowledge. That might be a given considering you'd only expect MHA fans to read this. However, I still like when a fanfic can stand on its own two feet.

altalt

My Hero Academia - Going Back to the Start

Nevarus

Liked by 21 people

LIKE

Replies19

Pararaio
PararaioLv5Pararaio

please link to fanfiction sites.

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv5SnoozySloth

https://***.fanfiction.net/anime/

Pararaio:please link to fanfiction sites.
Pararaio
PararaioLv5Pararaio

thank you

SnoozySloth:https://***.fanfiction.net/anime/
The_Rad_One
The_Rad_OneLv13The_Rad_One

Is there romance since it is a fan fic?

SnoozySloth:https://***.fanfiction.net/anime/
SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv5SnoozySloth

Yes. There was when I read it.

The_Rad_One:Is there romance since it is a fan fic?
The_Rad_One
The_Rad_OneLv13The_Rad_One

Is it momo

SnoozySloth:Yes. There was when I read it.
Monarch_Erebus
Monarch_ErebusLv4Monarch_Erebus

Any fanfiction recommendations?? From your comment I could see that you have a good judgement, I would really appreciate it if you could recommend some.

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv5SnoozySloth

Unfortunately, I haven't really read enough of them lately since I'm fairly busy. I'm also super picky and have found almost no fanfics that have really satisfied me, this one being one of the few that did. I really liked the Naruto fanfic Dreaming of Sunshine, but I also didn't like it. It had the best writing of any fanfic I've read and a really interesting character self-insert. However, it followed the original story almost exactly, which was boring. Fanfics on this site tend to have better ideas with bad grammar/writing while fanfics on fanfiction seem to have better grammar/writing but lacking in original story ideas. If you read non fanfics then feel free to check out my original story as well =p. It's called Steampunk Apocalypse!

Monarch_Erebus:Any fanfiction recommendations?? From your comment I could see that you have a good judgement, I would really appreciate it if you could recommend some.
Monarch_Erebus
Monarch_ErebusLv4Monarch_Erebus

That was fast. Yup you're already in my library. Have you read Legacy? it's Naruto's fanfic.

SnoozySloth:Unfortunately, I haven't really read enough of them lately since I'm fairly busy. I'm also super picky and have found almost no fanfics that have really satisfied me, this one being one of the few that did. I really liked the Naruto fanfic Dreaming of Sunshine, but I also didn't like it. It had the best writing of any fanfic I've read and a really interesting character self-insert. However, it followed the original story almost exactly, which was boring. Fanfics on this site tend to have better ideas with bad grammar/writing while fanfics on fanfiction seem to have better grammar/writing but lacking in original story ideas. If you read non fanfics then feel free to check out my original story as well =p. It's called Steampunk Apocalypse!
Monarch_Erebus
Monarch_ErebusLv4Monarch_Erebus

Appreciate the time. Thanks.

SnoozySloth:Unfortunately, I haven't really read enough of them lately since I'm fairly busy. I'm also super picky and have found almost no fanfics that have really satisfied me, this one being one of the few that did. I really liked the Naruto fanfic Dreaming of Sunshine, but I also didn't like it. It had the best writing of any fanfic I've read and a really interesting character self-insert. However, it followed the original story almost exactly, which was boring. Fanfics on this site tend to have better ideas with bad grammar/writing while fanfics on fanfiction seem to have better grammar/writing but lacking in original story ideas. If you read non fanfics then feel free to check out my original story as well =p. It's called Steampunk Apocalypse!
SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv5SnoozySloth

I have not. Might be interesting. Not sure I'd like it though. My biggest issue tends to be that I love the Naruto world and characters except for literally the main characters. I could never stand Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. Lol. Shikamaru will always be my favorite character by a long shot.

Monarch_Erebus:That was fast. Yup you're already in my library. Have you read Legacy? it's Naruto's fanfic.
Monarch_Erebus
Monarch_ErebusLv4Monarch_Erebus

Naruto is Grandson of Madara 😉

SnoozySloth:I have not. Might be interesting. Not sure I'd like it though. My biggest issue tends to be that I love the Naruto world and characters except for literally the main characters. I could never stand Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. Lol. Shikamaru will always be my favorite character by a long shot.
ComTolManBoePyaJhu
ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

myumara gone mia, probably RL kill him~ could u recommendation other novels worth 2 read?

SnoozySloth
SnoozySlothLv5SnoozySloth

Sorry. Don't really have any. I've had no time to read lately between work, school, and writing my own book =\

ComTolManBoePyaJhu:myumara gone mia, probably RL kill him~ could u recommendation other novels worth 2 read?
CrazyChemist
CrazyChemistLv4CrazyChemist

I like it very much

FReeeeeeLightnovel
FReeeeeeLightnovelLv4FReeeeeeLightnovel

I know this is dead but you should read the games we play

SnoozySloth:Sorry. Don't really have any. I've had no time to read lately between work, school, and writing my own book =\
Jokr_Avenger
Jokr_AvengerLv4Jokr_Avenger

-Good arguments hehehe and I like momo was cool, I'm a simple guy who likes construction and history, I was making the status mistake but it was because I forgot.

Thehorizontal_boi
Thehorizontal_boiLv3Thehorizontal_boi

RulerOfTheMoleRats
RulerOfTheMoleRatsLv1RulerOfTheMoleRats

Thanks bro, very comprehensive review.