one of best underrated novel i ever read.... best story line..... totally loved it.i dont know why cant i ppost his comment so im writting some unnecessary stups....sorry btw guys

A very interesting story, love the humour and the author's ways of writing. It's a different taste but once hooked, you always wait for the update.👍

You want comedy? read this You want true harem? read this Perverted MC? read this NOT DENSE MC? read this OP MC? read this Having a bad day? read this Having a good day? read this Having exam tomorrow and you don't feel like studying? read this Parents are not home? read this Why did I write this? read this Okay stop. read this STOP. read this F*ck this. read this

A novel for a true pussy, for a true wuss. The MC can not even be considered to be a man. Damn, the plot is good but why make the MC like that? A cock-tease and a pussy. Nice writing by the way but wrong character development. Making an R-18 novel and perverted MC with no dick.

That's a great work, keep it coming and please don't drop this novel because you will be dissapointing some of us. Love the way the MC is really perverted in all ways.

Not reading the complete novel yet still reviewing it makes this review less authentic, however let me share my thoughts on it. *** 01. The Plot Mix-Up. The plot of the novel seems good and properly aligned to how a web novel should be. However, the author just dumped a whole lot of plot at the beginning. The start should've been slow with the MC exploring the world and raising his strength in the tutorial village. But suddenly his 'first wife' who's a succubus comes and unfolds the readers some damn big plot, which is a given. However it broke the link to the ongoing plot and made me feel that what's going on right now is a waste of time. In short, it just killed the tension a reader has for the Protagonist. The tension here was the question of how the MC is going to increase his strength and status, how would he survive in the new world. Also, after breaking the beginner plot with the huge plot, the beginner plot continues again which I found very weird. For me the plot just didn't flow naturally. 02. The Humiliated Protagonist. Okay, this point might create an argument since there are different types of readers. Some are casual, some are invested in the story but still independent, while others are immersive readers. I am the third kind, an immersive reader. For this reason I don't like if the MC is humiliated or acts like a loser. Since I'm reading a web novel, I'm here for the MC getting high in his life, getting all the wealth, women, power and status. However the beginning was a little disappointing for me. Yes, it's incorrect to criticize just for this since the plot would develop, however the starting chapters unfortunately didn't catch my interest. 03. Dumb MC Are dumb MC's bad? Of course not. If the story needs it, a dumb MC can enrich the plot. However, for a moment just imagine. You're suddenly transmigrated into another world. You don't know anything about it, except that you perhaps might be a Protagonist material according to the web novels you've read. You don't know anybody, and you don't know the intentions of the people around you. You don't know the world's history or culture, but you know that there are similar people like him that have come from other worlds. You don't have money or anything, and you didn't even have any clothes when you arrived. So would you make some bet to date a girl, or would you try your best to make yourself safe? Yes, the MC later acquires god-like powers and perhaps nobody would be able to harm him, but what I'm talking here was his attitude. Unfortunately I was here for some scheming and strategies and stuff like that, but the story beginning was a little different. *** In the end, this story is not for me, but it might be for you.

Dog**** spelling and grammar. Its like MTL. As of chapter 10 or so, the world building is great though. ..... ............. .. .. . .......... ..

If you are going to be a dicck about it.. Go on.. Saying that the author's writing is worse than a kid... Saying MC is being Dumb. Broken English.. collection of words... Calling this novel trash.. You fu×k×rs have not even read 50 chps and start reviewing this reading 2 to 10 chaps.. Every body started feeling like they are the great reviewers of all time..putting **** out there... For all of those who reviewed this as trash... have you ever written a novel... do you F****** know how challenging it is to write a novel...... Do you know how consistent you need to be to meet fans expectations every day.. Do you know how your reviews make author's feel like.... They are not Super rich and have time to write novels all day... Many of these authors struggle day to day with there own problems and still write chapters at night... If you wish to support the author or help him in his growth..tell him what he could improve..and what he is lacking...Don't put upfornt posters of your ****ty opinions Coming to me... This is a f****** good novel.. The grammar has never f******* bothered me... I loved the f******* comedy that was crazy lit everytime... Has good plot.. Good world building... Good progress.. Loved it through out... and hoping that author would continue it soon....

This is beyond trash!!! I can't believe anyone who reads would actually see this piece of shoddily collected words as a suitable read!!! It is not only a waste of time and space it is disappointingly poor in every sense. No coordination in the writing. World building is non-existent. The characters have no builds. The descriptive prowess of the writer is nothing to write home about. This is a waste of time. Do not read this.

The story is great, but one thing that bothering me is why the fck there is R18 tag when there isnt any smut scene as far as i read this novel?