Item: Law of Creation
Rating: 4.6
Author: flatchest

flatchestLv56yr

2018-04-23 20:34

okay, i will make some point of this story. a reincarnated cultivator in another world, something similar to magic world i think? from what i read, the story is more like a slow paced novel. from what i see, there still a lot of development for the world. i wish to see more about char development (mc is something closer to hikikomori, but she tried to change) the unfortunate thing is author sometime didnt describe some detail of event. maybe it is a plot for later?

Law of Creation

FrostDream193

4.1

172 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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FrostDream193Author

Thank you for your review :D I will accept your suggestions. And for the story itself, more of it would be explained at later chapter. I hope you will enjoy my story :D

6yr

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FrostDream193Author

I am sorry for Dao friends here, there is something bad happen. It's not very bad, it is just something annoying, there is a bug on inkstone platform. If you are reading this, that means you are lucky. # skip # chapter # 2 # and # 3 Make it simple, the posted chapter 2 and 3 should be chapter 6 and 7. Thanks to law of bug, those new chapter is inserted between chapter 2 and 3 Even if I have delete those bugged chapter and reupload it, as you can see on table of content. Once again i repeat my message, skip chapter 2 and 3!

6yr

FrostDream193Author

I am sorry to fill the review pages for a little information. 1. since posting a little announcement was a little hassle in the review area, i will post them in the synopsis area. 2. I will readjust the released chapter into 10 chapter a week, maybe sometime less thank to RL. But don't worry, each chapter would definitely above 1k words 3. After the end of this arc (maybe every time an arc is finished), I will readjust all of the posted chapter. There are some point that needs to be reedit, like grammars, tenses (my mortal enemy), writing style, and maybe i will readjust the story narration here. 4. And thank you for all of your support :D 5. Let me be shameless this time and give myself a full 5 score XD

6yr

sunofthebeachLv12

Okay, overall the improvement of the story is good. Writing quality is not the best, but much better than before. If i have to point out something, please give us more action lol

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painintheashLv5

The story have a slow pace Fortunately currently author is posting a few chapters in a day. Maybe author should post a few chapter in a day until it has a stable storyline? I mean something like fighting, or fighting, or maybe fighting. And the synopsis is not too long, and there is no many spoiler from it. Well to tell the truth I am more interested in novel with synopsis like that lolololol Wel currently that is my review. Currently chapter 5, after maybe around tenth or twentieth chapter, I will give more review.

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ThousandHeavensLv5

This story is good, the MC isn't op at all, I felt pity for the MC when I read chapter 43, plz update quickly 140characters140characters140characters140characters

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Reveal spoiler

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Decent and different from a lot of other novels which only consists of cultivation. 😁 Keep up the good work. I will help you edit the chapters just dont know where to send the edited chapters :)

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