Putting aside how immature and self-entitled the author is, I'll give my honest review about this novel: The story overalls feels much blander and rushed as compared to the first version on RoyalRoadl. The interactions feel very forced and even cringey at times. The first version's encounters and story felt much more natural and humorous. I'd say it just feels like a low quality wish-fulfillment novel now.
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