Review Detail of Azrael4355 in Technomancer: Genesis
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Would give this higher but atm the quality isn't there yet but. AND THIS IS A HUGE "BUT" i give this a solid 5* on character design, concept is fresh and new and i can see where the author wants to take it. He's execution of the "WHAT" is solid as hell, let's hope his "How" improves because in the end of the day it's the journey that counts and makes us fall in love with the Characters in the novel. I wish you good luck bro, ill write a new review when you get the book around chapter 350 đ
Technomancer: Genesis
earldennison
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Read those books and i promise all will be made clear and i look forward to your other future works bro. I'm already a fan đ I'll give you an example and you'll find this in the book. Who do you find more endearing Sir Percival or Sir Lancelot? Now next question why. Answer Sir Percival, yes Sir Lancelot is the ultimate knight but Percival beats him due to his personal and the way his character was presented. Like i said your character design is solid you just need hooks to fish the readers and lock em all down. Trust me read those books you'll thank me later.
earldennison:Haha looks like you know this will reach that many chapters planning it to go up to a thousand actually. Could you point out the certain quality you are looking for so that it might aid me in making better content
earldennison:Thanks for the review btw. It was pretty constructive, I hope that I meet your expectations in the future. I am trying to constantly improve on every aspect be it my writing style and the content itself.