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So far, the writing quality has been great. No grammatical errors (or at least, not noticeable), which is a big plus. It also made reading the story much more enjoyable. However, there is still room for improvement, especially with the fight scenes. So far, the plot has been very interesting, and the logical nature of the MC very entertaining. The application of the concept of magical realism has been applied in a logical manner so far, so keep it up!
Technomancer: Genesis
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Thank you for your kind words good sir. I edit them as I notice them(the grammatical errors of course). I am somewhat proficient in English though I am far from being an expert. This is my first ever novel, I normally write poems, and I do admit I have trouble penning the fight scenes. Could you point out the specifics so that I could improve the fight scenes next time? There will be plenty of them peppered throughout the novel.