The basic aim of this novel is to basically try and parody the common tropes of most CN’s while still trying to maintain a sense of originality. A difficult task to do but I think this author has succeeded to some extent. I love the comedy and originality. While I do feel the comedy is a little forced in areas it’s still good. The only downside to this novel so far for me I think is that the lewd scenes certainly feel forced. I think this novel would definitely benefit from less or more naturally occurring ones. While it was nice and funny in the beginning, now that the characters have more depth to them, I just think it takes away from them. However, I love where the author is going with this novel and hope he continues to write more chapters. Tbh, with his release schedule I’m kind of worried about burnout.
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