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Review Detail of kcgrabin in The Chronicles of the Immortal God

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kcgrabin
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Hello Author here. Thank you for giving your time to read this novel of mine. This is my first novel and I hope all of you can instruct me on my shortcomings in this novel

The Chronicles of the Immortal God

kcgrabin

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thewayofKABOOMMMMM
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Ahh this is my dream come true I literally was thinking iii can't believe it But I swear that I was thinking of a novel with similar sypnosis from the I finished reading reading ah *cough**cough* I can't seem to recall right now Heavily looking forward to it May you get enough will, motivation, encouragement and time

thewayofKABOOMMMMM
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* cough* * cough* I may have gotten a little existed Best of luck And looking forward to op villains (if you and I think alike otherwise hmm I can't really think otherwise what sorry)

thewayofKABOOMMMMM:Ahh this is my dream come true I literally was thinking iii can't believe it But I swear that I was thinking of a novel with similar sypnosis from the I finished reading reading ah *cough**cough* I can't seem to recall right now Heavily looking forward to it May you get enough will, motivation, encouragement and time
thewayofKABOOMMMMM
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If he can control chaos(yin yang and 5 elements) then it would have been a complete package Wait I guess soul and mental (spirit) aspect is still lacking

kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

The soul and mental aspect will be vital around the Fourth Stage.

thewayofKABOOMMMMM:If he can control chaos(yin yang and 5 elements) then it would have been a complete package Wait I guess soul and mental (spirit) aspect is still lacking
cheemaboyz6
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what will be the release rate??

kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

at least 1 a day. If I do not have classes and I feel like it, I can revv it up to 5 chapters. But expect around 2 per day,

cheemaboyz6:what will be the release rate??
Czx775
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Wait what... The author is still at school??? What crazy world have i entered?? Anyway ill read this one when i had the chance too

kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

Haha I'm on college

Czx775:Wait what... The author is still at school??? What crazy world have i entered?? Anyway ill read this one when i had the chance too
cheemaboyz6
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Don't lie I just saw you in preschool

kcgrabin:Haha I'm on college
Krispos
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Is there romance in this novel?

kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

Time will know

Krispos:Is there romance in this novel?
NeverUMind
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I like the story so far. Maybe a little more balance between the funny, quirkiness and some seriousness. I believe you’re aiming for a light hearted adventure novel. But by adding some more serious tone with the levity will make it even better because each will be highlighted more by the contrast.

TZT
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Hi man, I lie your novel. Is there any way to transfer you spirit stones?

TZT
TZTLv4TZT

*like

TZT:Hi man, I lie your novel. Is there any way to transfer you spirit stones?
kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

I dunno too. but you can give a review

TZT:Hi man, I lie your novel. Is there any way to transfer you spirit stones?
FreeTrial
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The story surprisingly good Hey why don't join our group in FB Wuxia Readers Group Maybe you could have more readers if you join

kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

hahah I have joined already there

FreeTrial:The story surprisingly good Hey why don't join our group in FB Wuxia Readers Group Maybe you could have more readers if you join
kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

so what do I need to do now?

FreeTrial:The story surprisingly good Hey why don't join our group in FB Wuxia Readers Group Maybe you could have more readers if you join
kcgrabin
kcgrabinAuthorkcgrabin

so what do I need to do now?

FreeTrial:The story surprisingly good Hey why don't join our group in FB Wuxia Readers Group Maybe you could have more readers if you join
FreeTrial
FreeTrialLv6FreeTrial

Well you could introduce yourself and ask them for votes LoL, well because we are fellow sect disciplines from tomorrow I'll vote your novel Have faith in Lord fifth

kcgrabin:so what do I need to do now?