Review Detail of Randomguy791 in Rebuilding the Sun Kingdom!

I couldn't bring myself to go on. Right at the start you are slapped with a bunch of cliches and everything seems forced in order to make the story work out. MC appears out of nowhere, claims to be king and everyone just accepts it and moves on with life. WTFFF?!! No, things don't just magically work out that way, especially when these people are being hunted down after their kingdom fell. They would be suspicious of everyone and everything that wasn't originally part of their group. Perhaps this does get better but seeing this beginning, I don't have high hopes of its future.