WRITING QUALITY Pretty much top-notch writing quality. The prose is descriptive, meticulous, and correct. The care for the work from the author is obvious. There are rare bugaboos with verb tense that would be missed with automated grammar checks and probably wouldn't crop up readily on a just-finished-writing reread, so they're more easily forgiven when they peek out at me. STABILITY OF UPDATES The author communicates well about their schedule and sticks with it. This is a daily release novel with bonuses. Excellent rating here too. STORY DEVELOPMENT / CHARACTER DESIGN / WORLD BACKGROUND The author uses the beginning of the novel to do what should be done: introduce us to the concepts and characters and breathe life into the latter. Auxiliary characters are given depth and focus. We are introduced to the world's mechanics and how they impact these initial characters. The only demerit I can give here isn't a major one: you probably already know everything you need to know if you've read much in the genre. Very minor and not something actionable as the familiarity is also a plus. VERDICT This is a high-quality work, perhaps better than what the genre it occupies deserves. It's updated regularly and often and the author takes the time to build the world and its characters up. I will definitely have this on my list to continue past my 15 chapter benchmark, and can recommend it to folks who value the same things I do in a work.
Liron
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