I love the story you have greatly inspired me but so far the only thing I really dislike is your naming of the characters some are cool but some feel out of place with the vibe I’m getting idk maybe it’s me but overall I love it bro
Liron
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LIKEThanks for the review. About the names, well I'm open to suggestions. I usually just went with what appeared in my head, the exception being 3 very important characters, one of them being Amon. I won't change the characters that are already written, but maybe I could use your suggestion on new characters.
No I love the main characters name and even some of the bad kids to so far maybe it’s because I’m weird but seeing a guy named Daniel in a world like that it just sucks me back out of the book but he seems to be important so I’ll get over it but I like the names you came up with that I haven’t heard in real life like Amon yah know
Liron:Thanks for the review. About the names, well I'm open to suggestions. I usually just went with what appeared in my head, the exception being 3 very important characters, one of them being Amon. I won't change the characters that are already written, but maybe I could use your suggestion on new characters.
I see your point. Well, Daniel has such a common name in part to be more relatable. He is a common guy, after all. A common guy with a terrible life. And yes, he is very important for the story. But I'll try to find some cooler names for other important characters.
CulturedMan:No I love the main characters name and even some of the bad kids to so far maybe it’s because I’m weird but seeing a guy named Daniel in a world like that it just sucks me back out of the book but he seems to be important so I’ll get over it but I like the names you came up with that I haven’t heard in real life like Amon yah know