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Jack02
Jack02Lv106yr
2018-09-27 18:55

I liked the story, is original and the protagonist is well developed. Is a bit rushed some times and some facts need clarification but as a whole this story is good.

Sovereign of Blood

Lumpish_Haggard
4.2
6 Chs

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Lumpish_Haggard
Lumpish_HaggardAuthor

Hello Fellow Daoists! How are you? I just wrote this Novel on a whim but I won't be going on any hiatus before completing it..Stick around if you like the novel and you can also drop by later to check if you didn't like it now. I am always grateful for all the criticisms and suggestions that you guys might have!

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Sirocco
SiroccoLv6

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Pearsonbiatch
PearsonbiatchLv3

This is a very refreshing 'Evil Protagonist' story as it steps away from the overused clichés of the Xuanhuan and xianxia genre. Although it has a reincarnation and system attribute to it, The author very cleverly twists the plot again and again and keeps you excited for what's coming next. Looking Forward for the next chapter!

6yr
Morgan
MorganLv5

The protagonist does things for no reason, very childish and not the mindset that one would expect from someone of his origin. Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler Filler.

6yr
Dens88
Dens88Lv14

It's very poorly written, childish, lacks sense, and a good flow. I can't get past that and have dropped it. I also have trouble understanding the many 5 star reviews. I would get it if it was well written and just not my cup of tea but with this...yea.

6yr
AcceleratorLvL5
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NineNetherBird
NineNetherBirdLv4

It's nice seeing another evil novel here. The characters and world look nice. The only thing bothering me is the grammar. But besides that it is a nice read. I will wait for more chapters to decide on it.

7yr
amirflame
amirflameLv3

An action-packed, brilliantly gruesome tale of an immensely fascinating protagonist, or if it's okay to call him that! Love the graphic scenes. Love the characters. Love the deep and layered type of the storysetting. A must read. Kudos to the author. 😈😍

6yr
faster
fasterLv14

Pretty good story at the beginning,but then it felt really rushed.......................really rushed...................really rushed.......

6yr
Noss
NossLv5

Good concept with a string beggining. At some point though the strory starts to lose any sense of coherence, I repeatedly felt I had missed something but it turns out the author just left things out. Had great potential just seems like it wasn't thought out properly

6yr
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