Review Detail of Drako_Shattersword in Rebirth: The New Game of Life

I have read a few chapters and it seems like a great idea for a story but the author is using other famous books for dumb ideas. What author is like he cant be named and then names him. The super evil villan is Zac?!? What kind of evil name is that. Plus the author needs an editor since his english is so bad. Overall the story should use the author for ideas but have someone else write the actual novel. 👎