Review Detail of Kurobell319 in Rebirth: The New Game of Life

Very difficult read. Character creation is a bit rough. Also plot holes make you just go "what just happened?" To top it off with grammatical errors every other sentence. If you can get through all that, then you can finally get to a cliché filled story that is hard to follow. Gave it a good effort. Was too much a struggle for these eyes of mine...