Review Detail of Nawaabzadah in Rebirth: The New Game of Life
Review detail
Everything sucks as if your first fifty chapters suck than how in the world are you gonna get readers. Writing style sucks, word arrangement sucks, don't know english, don't know how to or whete to use prepositions. Total **** story.
Rebirth: The New Game of Life
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you say the first fifty chapters suck, but I would like to point out a few things. 1) your avatar (as of the moment I am writing this comment) says that you have only read up to the 10th chapter, so how would you know what is going on over the next 40 chapters? 2) You do not have a leg to stand on when it comes to grammar and spelling. While it is not as bad as some that I have seen, it is nothing to be proud of. 3) Why are you so angry? What possible reason is there for you to be this angry? The author straight up tells people in the description of this novel that, "As an novice writer, I make several mistakes of inconsistency in history. I apologize for this. My english is very bad so sorry for that too".
I have read first fifty chapters from another account. I started reading from chapter 1 to chapter 10 to check whether the story has been made understandable, edited and cleaned off of little mistakes which make the mood sour. But as far as I could guess nothing has been done. That's why I am angry and dropped it.
Nawaabzadah:I have read first fifty chapters from another account. I started reading from chapter 1 to chapter 10 to check whether the story has been made understandable, edited and cleaned off of little mistakes which make the mood sour. But as far as I could guess nothing has been done. That's why I am angry and dropped it.
NocturnalGhost:I’d like to point out that when you criticized this story for it’s poor English and pretty much didn’t give any constructive criticism you yourself used English incorrectly with you typos
Actually, it is bloody needed so new readers can have a review that points out its flaws, and how bad they are. Plenty of authors say they have poor english, but their story's grammar can range from 1-8/10 on readability depending.
PurplishCherry:Dumba*s! Lol try writing a novel of your own. Your grammar would be **** too you dumb prick. The author literally said that he is not good with English. You pointing out something so obvious isn't needed! Final evaluation: Your review sucks!
Usually I would say you are right and I would completely agree with you. However, this is a different case. To put it out there, I've only read 10 chapters or less as well, but I already cant stand this ****ty novel 😂. This is my first time commenting on how bad a novel is. Usually I'll just go on about my life but this novel is so bad that I had to say something. No matter how bad a novel is I'll always read at least around 50 chapters but with this one I just cant. But then again you are entitled to your opinion so give it a read. If you can ignore, or god forbid love, the terrible writing quality, the romance that is even more forced than rape (stole this from another comment 😏) and terribly cliche plot than good for you.
Aquadiver289:you say the first fifty chapters suck, but I would like to point out a few things. 1) your avatar (as of the moment I am writing this comment) says that you have only read up to the 10th chapter, so how would you know what is going on over the next 40 chapters? 2) You do not have a leg to stand on when it comes to grammar and spelling. While it is not as bad as some that I have seen, it is nothing to be proud of. 3) Why are you so angry? What possible reason is there for you to be this angry? The author straight up tells people in the description of this novel that, "As an novice writer, I make several mistakes of inconsistency in history. I apologize for this. My english is very bad so sorry for that too".
