So I've read some of it, and this guy need a proof reader or an editor to fix the glaring text errors, the him/her and I/them/you are just a couple of the most obvious examples where the authors meaning in describing the who/what/how situation is happening is confusing and/or contradictory to what the author intendedđ© If those errors can be fixed then this may be a decent story, until then it feels like a somewhat machine translated story đ
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