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littlefrench
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2018-04-15 19:48

This review will be quite harsh 1 star for writing quality, why ? Because of, first the extremely special vocabulary of games which keeps me from even understanding certain sentences (and I read lots of mtls so I’ve become pretty good at understanding the meaning of a sentence from only a few words). Second, the most basic grammar and time correlation in a sentence isn’t respected. 1 star stability : not much to say, even though it’s been rectified, the very fact that the novel was put on this website without the express permission of the original author... 3 star story dev : the story seems intersting but I just can’t get into it due to grammar (I’ve only read three chapters so I don’t dare say it’s gonna be bad but I did start thinking it wasn’t going in the right direction from only this so...) Character design 3 star : nothing to say just like for story dev World background 2 : it’s a fanfic in a world which wasn’t created by the author, the world of Naruto, if you loved the original story then you’ll probably appreciate this one, but that’s a given so only 2 To conclude, if you are fond of the different game universes this novel refers to with the vocabulary, if you don’t mind grammar and if you like Naruto then you’ll probably enjoy this... I won’t tell anyone not to read this as I’ve only been as far as the third chapter and it might be a lot better after, but it really is the first novel on qidian I’m THIS disapointed in

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