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MonarchOfSilence
MonarchOfSilenceLv54yr
2020-10-06 05:10

If it was an anti hero lead or at least a neutral one, the grammar mistakes that make me sick could be ignored but no, we have have good guy that can t go on his own business. If you learnt about the existence of Superpowers why the f#ck are you spending time learning bullshit when you should learn to protect yourself #moron. Sad I was really happy with the world building excepting a lot...

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Ambroshus
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Uhh how long did you read for when you wrote this review cause uh he learns multiple languages later on and learns how to use a multitude of martial arts and weapons

MonarchOfSilence
MonarchOfSilenceLv5

Idk around chapter 15 but I was not able to continue reading because the grammar is too bad. And let s be realistic, if people can read machine translated english, when asked something I am sure what they understood on some parts is complety different from what the author wanted to say, if they don t know english really well. Idk I can t read machine translated even if I understand the general sense of the sentence, why? Because is it f**king jarring to the ear for someone that really knows english. If the grammar is improved the story would be so much better.

Ambroshus:Uhh how long did you read for when you wrote this review cause uh he learns multiple languages later on and learns how to use a multitude of martial arts and weapons
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