Review Detail of Extrememortal in Dual Sword God
Review detail
Okay, so I really think this novel has a lot of potential. And if you did not state that it was your first novel, I can assure you that most people won't notice. And I also like the fact the mc was not at the peak of martial arts in his previous world and he get a do-over. And I would advise you to try to make your story believable and also in the attempt to make the novel "different " from other novels PLEASE and PLEASE don't spoil the novel for us that are really really beginning to be fans of yours.
Dual Sword God
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Thanks I'll try to not get into the common cliches seen too much and keep it on track based on how i planned it. Im trying to keep some of the plot hidden and secrets non revieled but some guy was complaining about chapter 5 about the age inconsistency lol had to clarify it a little bit more so as to avoid others compaing about the same thing. But then again when i posted it on wattpad no one complained i guess its just him having personal views lol