Review Detail of Ozzz in One Mortal Ten Thousand Gods

Your work is amazing for a few ****** reasons imo. The first of course being that you are one of the rare "authors" here who can spell. Secondly, I think you are the very first I've ever read, who manages to recreate a somewhat realistic "reincarnation", if you can call it that. Lastly, the background lore comes in somewhat appropriate portions, which makes for a living world. Congratulations with this project, as it seems to have some good prospects. On another note, your chapters could do with an additional layer of proof reading, to avoid blatant mistakes, as well as reformulating some awkward phrasing.