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forestbuddy
forestbuddyLv46yr
2018-05-19 23:39

Grammar is good... Characters are alive... MC overpowers a practitioner when she's still a mortal... Story has potential... Nuff said. By the way, is the author here real? It says she has 2 published books already in Google.

Flash Me Back

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aira_irish
aira_irishLv4

Yes. She's a published author in the Philippines and most of her om going stories are posted in Wattpad. You could check it out its the same username.

6yr
aira_irish
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*on

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patata
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FMB tells a story of our MC chancing upon a curse that allows a person to be forgotten by anyone who had any interaction with him or her. I admit, it's not an easy story to write. Therefore, this Seat thanks every fellow Daoist who gave this story a fighting chance and read through the chapters even though there are much more stories worth your time. The story is set in a world so much like ours -- where technology rules supreme and regulates lives of the common people. However, unknown to most mortals, there lies a reality far more mystical and magical than those in ancient tales that they used to fantasize about. Practitioners of Arts, wielders of powers that defy science, titled immortals and hailed as gods, feared as devils and part of the unknown, co-exist together with them. Yes, they are real... Read on as our MC stumbles into a web of lies and secrets that threaten to destroy the ****** life she protected with all she had. This is an adventure you wouldn't want to miss.

6yr

Mija_favy
Mija_favyLv4

Story is very good but it seems d author went on extinction n gonna come back in d 30th century. Damn!!!!. How can u b so creative n yet u abadon creativity. Wherever you are, u better come back now &finish wat u started. Understood

5yr
Gee
GeeLv10

This has an interesting synopsis! I’m torn between reading it and tossing it to my library lol hope it is really good though! Will change the review after reading a few chapters

6yr
mavm
mavmLv4

this needs more readers! love this female protagonist! cant wait for more .............................................................................

6yr
mag11
mag11Lv6

So far so good. No typos/ mistyped words...but slow production of chapters. You can put more sense of humor between the characters she would meet in the future since it's a heavy storyline...and that they would comfort her when she's at her darkest/ vulnerable times...Good story,by the way. Do you have it in Wattpad or something?

6yr
soulla
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4yr
True_Seeker
True_SeekerLv11

Amazing writing style. The synopsis sounded amazing so I gave the novel a try. I'm glad I did because it is one of the most unique book I have read. So far so good.

6yr
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