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Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthor4yrSilent_Dawn

Hello, author here. First of, thank you for taking your time and reading the novel. Please don't hesitate to call me out on my errors especially in grammar and inconsistencies in the story. I have designed the story based on the numerous japanese dungeon-type novels I have read, and I wanted to incorporate some western and southeast asian customs in the story. Hopefully, the character development is not going to be bland, but based on the hero, sudden changes *may* occur in his actions and personality. This is short story, hopefully spanning 200 - 300 chapters only. Word count is quite low, so no worries!

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Master of the Dungeon, Exploring the World? What?

Silent_Dawn

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DaruneAlbane
DaruneAlbaneLv5DaruneAlbane

I wish you luck with your work ... write what you like and enjoy yourself and dont let the craplords cause you to quit

DaruneAlbane
DaruneAlbaneLv5DaruneAlbane

As an aside as you are still writing this i assume PLEASE let Intelligence do something other then just give mana/regen It is annoying when a writer uses a game like world and a person being born in it having the intelligence stat not do anything

VlassisBehrakis
VlassisBehrakisLv5VlassisBehrakis

I like it is quite unique.

Radista
RadistaLv4Radista

just dont drop it, bcz this type of novel is quite rare~

TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv6TigerBlooImmortal

Wait is Eli a guy and is the Mc into men?

Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthorSilent_Dawn

There's a secret about Eli's real *** that I would reveal once the MC can finally explore the outside world.

TigerBlooImmortal:Wait is Eli a guy and is the Mc into men?
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv6TigerBlooImmortal

Immature I just wanna know cause I'm not Into yaoi though I have nothing against it I just have no such preference

Silent_Dawn:There's a secret about Eli's real *** that I would reveal once the MC can finally explore the outside world.
Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthorSilent_Dawn

Dude. the MC is straight. Eli is one of the special beings cursed to look like a man, but in actuality, a woman. I can't tell more because that would spoil the events that the MC would do about the curse.

TigerBlooImmortal:Immature I just wanna know cause I'm not Into yaoi though I have nothing against it I just have no such preference
TigerBlooImmortal
TigerBlooImmortalLv6TigerBlooImmortal

OK I just wanted to confirm "sword fighting"😐

Silent_Dawn:Dude. the MC is straight. Eli is one of the special beings cursed to look like a man, but in actuality, a woman. I can't tell more because that would spoil the events that the MC would do about the curse.
Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthorSilent_Dawn

I didn't want to put it in a way that was too boring and wanted the readers to interpret it. 🀣🀣🀣 Anyhoo I should add in the future the gender bender tag tho.

TigerBlooImmortal:OK I just wanted to confirm "sword fighting"😐
matt49
matt49Lv6matt49

Good luck and thank you for your workπŸ™πŸ˜‡

Justin_T
Justin_TLv5Justin_T

before I start reading the story by dungeon master do you mean he is building a dungeon or conquering them? is this story taking place in one dungeon is what I'd like to know?

Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthorSilent_Dawn

He is both types!

Justin_T:before I start reading the story by dungeon master do you mean he is building a dungeon or conquering them? is this story taking place in one dungeon is what I'd like to know?
Guenni92
Guenni92Lv6Guenni92

A realy good idea to make a legend for things like potions or money. It shows you put some thought in not only your story but also the surroundings like how economics work in your world.

Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthorSilent_Dawn

Thanks. I plan to add more for other aspects in the story soon.

Guenni92:A realy good idea to make a legend for things like potions or money. It shows you put some thought in not only your story but also the surroundings like how economics work in your world.
GaelBlue
GaelBlueLv5GaelBlue

Huhuhu when I reach the peak of imagining that this is a bl story suddenly I saw that it is not a bl story 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

the0m
the0mLv5the0m

may you have better luck in your next journey for although you may have decided to turn back at least you started now all you need to do is just learn change and get better. however i truly found you work enjoyable although it sucks that you have decided to end your path hear you had a really good start. .... I find it sad though that we didn't get to follow him to the end of his journey. well i hope to see you around and hope you try again.... .... ..... oops it seems i forgot to ask why did you want to end you story any specific reason farewell and untill next time

Dragonleader105
Dragonleader105Lv5Dragonleader105

ooh why did you change the title back? i doubt you would start this up again but still interesting

Silent_Dawn
Silent_DawnAuthorSilent_Dawn

I'm beginning the process of editing the story around may. Just a reminder for myself.

Dragonleader105:ooh why did you change the title back? i doubt you would start this up again but still interesting
EqueX
EqueXLv5EqueX

Good luck ~

Silent_Dawn:I'm beginning the process of editing the story around may. Just a reminder for myself.