Hello, author here. First of, thank you for taking your time and reading the novel. Please don't hesitate to call me out on my errors especially in grammar and inconsistencies in the story. I have designed the story based on the numerous japanese dungeon-type novels I have read, and I wanted to incorporate some western and southeast asian customs in the story. Hopefully, the character development is not going to be bland, but based on the hero, sudden changes *may* occur in his actions and personality. This is short story, hopefully spanning 200 - 300 chapters only. Word count is quite low, so no worries!
Silent_Dawn
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LIKEThere's a secret about Eli's real *** that I would reveal once the MC can finally explore the outside world.
TigerBlooImmortal:Wait is Eli a guy and is the Mc into men?
Immature I just wanna know cause I'm not Into yaoi though I have nothing against it I just have no such preference
Silent_Dawn:There's a secret about Eli's real *** that I would reveal once the MC can finally explore the outside world.
Dude. the MC is straight. Eli is one of the special beings cursed to look like a man, but in actuality, a woman. I can't tell more because that would spoil the events that the MC would do about the curse.
TigerBlooImmortal:Immature I just wanna know cause I'm not Into yaoi though I have nothing against it I just have no such preference
Silent_Dawn:Dude. the MC is straight. Eli is one of the special beings cursed to look like a man, but in actuality, a woman. I can't tell more because that would spoil the events that the MC would do about the curse.
I didn't want to put it in a way that was too boring and wanted the readers to interpret it. 🤣🤣🤣 Anyhoo I should add in the future the gender bender tag tho.
TigerBlooImmortal:OK I just wanted to confirm "sword fighting"😐
Justin_T:before I start reading the story by dungeon master do you mean he is building a dungeon or conquering them? is this story taking place in one dungeon is what I'd like to know?
Guenni92:A realy good idea to make a legend for things like potions or money. It shows you put some thought in not only your story but also the surroundings like how economics work in your world.
may you have better luck in your next journey for although you may have decided to turn back at least you started now all you need to do is just learn change and get better. however i truly found you work enjoyable although it sucks that you have decided to end your path hear you had a really good start. .... I find it sad though that we didn't get to follow him to the end of his journey. well i hope to see you around and hope you try again.... .... ..... oops it seems i forgot to ask why did you want to end you story any specific reason farewell and untill next time
Dragonleader105:ooh why did you change the title back? i doubt you would start this up again but still interesting
Silent_Dawn:I'm beginning the process of editing the story around may. Just a reminder for myself.