Review Detail of Wadsdfe in Antagonist Gets A Plot Armor
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I really appreciate your novel but you really should sort this "possession-thing" out and kill the old Wang Xie or give a good reason why he is still under the influence of the "evil Antagonist". Another point is, though just my personal preference that the MC should toughen up, gain some wit I mean he is the damn Author. He knows where the lucky-chances and treasures, Cultivation Arts and other stuff are and what is required to obtain them. I mean you should have this intention anyway which we can see from the Title of the novel yet you should pay attention that this novel won't get a slightly different "Historys Strongest Senior Brother". But you have some really good points and possibilities to play with. I wish you lots of success.
Antagonist Gets A Plot Armor
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woah woah woah. slow down, mate. being the damn author doesn't mean he's omniscient. though he could try to to remember all the plots he has written, 90% of it will all be about the MC he has written. take for example; you wrote an empire. just an empire. and then you went to that world where that empire existed. and then you can see that the empire had suddenly written itself on its own. you didn't write that there were locals coming to welcome you, but the empire had it. you didn't write that there was an emperor, but he came to welcome you anyway. the logic i'm trying to tell is, the world you have simply written can suddenly create things on its own to become a complete world. and as for knowing every cultivation out there, DON"T TEMP ME MATE! i almost wrote another Emperor's domination story and i'm not going to have MCF calculate his fingers over everything. ALthough, i will try to liv up to your expectations. THanks for your support!
Plus, most authors don't actually write out the way to cultivate the cultivation techniques. They just go, 'he circulated his qi' and as such only know the name of the techniques. Or treasures? Bruh, 'ran into (name of dangerous forest) and came across (name of treasure).' He'll end up spending days or even weeks scouring the forest for the treasure and maybe the MC will accidentally find it in the middle of his searches, it's not like the authors clearly label out how much time will pass or whether people will remember all the arcs.
What you are comparing is the same thing. Or is it that you expect the author (plot armor/clone) to explain all those little details in the novel. Also, we as a reader may be confused about some stuff but the author should know them. The things they write are literally the manifestation of their visualization. Of course they simplify to give us a general direction of what they are trying to say so we won’t get confused.
coconuteats:Plus, most authors don't actually write out the way to cultivate the cultivation techniques. They just go, 'he circulated his qi' and as such only know the name of the techniques. Or treasures? Bruh, 'ran into (name of dangerous forest) and came across (name of treasure).' He'll end up spending days or even weeks scouring the forest for the treasure and maybe the MC will accidentally find it in the middle of his searches, it's not like the authors clearly label out how much time will pass or whether people will remember all the arcs.
RohanM:What you are comparing is the same thing. Or is it that you expect the author (plot armor/clone) to explain all those little details in the novel. Also, we as a reader may be confused about some stuff but the author should know them. The things they write are literally the manifestation of their visualization. Of course they simplify to give us a general direction of what they are trying to say so we won’t get confused.