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LTbutterfly287
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So in all honesty I’ve decided to drop this, it’s not a bad read but it has major flaws. So the mc himself essentially has a physique that allows him to draw in one of the most powerful qi out there. The mc is also extremely talented but before the transmigration he was super lazy. So the pre-mc was super horrible that all his maids were afraid of him when he was nice. Honestly for a good portion of the story the mc just keeps talking about how he’s going to run away and hide. He also fails to realize that he’s more talented then the mc and also knows what the mc will get before he gets it. Now for some reason the author thought it was a good idea to make the mc have this pure uncontrollable typical antagonist personality solely when original mc of story is around. He makes no effort to bridge the gap and fix relations with the dude. Instead he constantly makes a solid effort to be his enemy and when mc does ask him for help which would greatly aid in fixing relations he instead says why should I and watch’s the mc almost die. So far the mc has shown very little plot armor and really has been a dick solely to the old mc. Even to when I last read he was still raving about how he’s just going to up and leave and not utilize his talents and make changes in himself for the better.

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Antagonist Gets A Plot Armor

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Plot_Armors_CloneAuthorPlot_Armors_Clone

you huh... don't mind if i use this to refer, right? i like how your keen with my work even though it was all blabber that had 50% of my motivation. could i ask what you like about the novel

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What I mainly liked was the mc was different it wasn’t the usual under dog mc. The mc was the antagonist, that’s something people never do. Also the mc has a unique physique that would have made him op later on. I mean the only reason I had for dropping it was the mc constantly saying he’s going to run away, the fact that whatever he did he could only be a dick to the original mc. The story had massive potential in my eyes just a few minor issues that bugged me to much.

Plot_Armors_Clone:you huh... don't mind if i use this to refer, right? i like how your keen with my work even though it was all blabber that had 50% of my motivation. could i ask what you like about the novel
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Plot_Armors_CloneAuthorPlot_Armors_Clone

haha... k. thanks. also, thanks for reading my novel.

LTbutterfly287:What I mainly liked was the mc was different it wasn’t the usual under dog mc. The mc was the antagonist, that’s something people never do. Also the mc has a unique physique that would have made him op later on. I mean the only reason I had for dropping it was the mc constantly saying he’s going to run away, the fact that whatever he did he could only be a dick to the original mc. The story had massive potential in my eyes just a few minor issues that bugged me to much.