Review Detail of santasrule in Olivia's Diary

Item: Olivia's Diary
Rating: 1.6

Review detail

santasruleLv56yrsantasrule

I have nothing to say about update stability. However, the writing style fails to flow, and the subject is a far cry from what ought to be present in a good novel. The author tells us a lot about the character, but fails to show anything new or interesting. The world is developed quite slowly and fragmentarily. Normally if a novel is okay, you let it go, but this was so painful to read it required a review, to save you from reading it.

Olivia's Diary

OliviaNoget

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Replies8

OliviaNogetAuthorOliviaNoget

*crying in the corner* My life isn't interesting!!! *sobbing*

6yr

OliviaNogetAuthorOliviaNoget

Can you tell me how I could improve the flow of my diary so it would be more pleasant to read?

6yr

zen_agniLv10zen_agni

Pat pat. Don't cry her highness. Otherwise i will also cry. *sob*

OliviaNoget:*crying in the corner* My life isn't interesting!!! *sobbing*

6yr

zen_agniLv10zen_agni

How about reading some famous people's dairy ? You may get inspiration, know more about how to express your feelings and experiences to readers in more understanding and ****** way and can improve your skills your highness. 🙇

OliviaNoget:Can you tell me how I could improve the flow of my diary so it would be more pleasant to read?

6yr

zen_agniLv10zen_agni

s i m p l e =****** ( don't know why it become like this )

OliviaNoget:Can you tell me how I could improve the flow of my diary so it would be more pleasant to read?

6yr

OliviaNogetAuthorOliviaNoget

Oh, thank you for your input :D I will start reading famous peoples diaries :)

zen_agni:How about reading some famous people's dairy ? You may get inspiration, know more about how to express your feelings and experiences to readers in more understanding and ****** way and can improve your skills your highness. 🙇

6yr

Bojuwoye_AyoolaLv3Bojuwoye_Ayoola

Trying reading Babe's Diary,it's my book. You might be nice enough to leave a review. Thanks

4yr

Bojuwoye_AyoolaLv3Bojuwoye_Ayoola

Trying reading Babe's Diary,it's my book. You might be nice enough to leave a review. Thanks

4yr