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Review Detail of Berj in Chronicles of the Weakest Wind Mage

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Berj
BerjLv56yrBerj

When I first looked at this novel, based on the image cover, I wasn't willing to read, because it seemed a lot like a cliché thing than not. However, fortunately, I was surprisingly wrong. The narrative is interesting and pleasant to read, and things are developing in a good way. It has a mix of humor and seriousness, which I find very entertaining. Just hoping there won’t be any sort of cliché romance. Just one thing that kinda irks me in the wrong way is the fact that several words are repeated along the narrative to the point of being annoying to read. Here’s an example on chapter 6: ** Harls inwardly sighed at hearing this. As the third prince and one of the candidates for inheriting the throne in the future, Felix had received the finest upbringing and education, making him far more intelligent than most children his age. However, his status at the royal palace meant that few would dare to talk back or disrespect him, so Felix had developed an arrogance typical to upper-class nobles. Harls had been assigned to Felix's side and watched Felix grow up ever since Felix was a baby, and viewed Felix almost like he would his own son. He felt that Felix's only drawback of arrogance was due to the environment he grew up in. Harls privately hoped that Felix could mature through this opportunity of going outside the Rodan Kingdom during this mission to gather intelligence on the Hoplia Kingdom for a future invasion. ** In a single sentence, the author said ‘Felix’ eight times. It could replace some of the words with prince, young prince, or any other synonymous making it more pleasant to read. Overall, I’ll keep it on my library waiting for new releases, I think this will be a good novel to keep an eye to.

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Zayah
ZayahLv15Zayah

Thanks. Now I kniw its gonna pull a Mad Snail on me. i.e. by having a good story but failing to remove -unessessary- words or sentences that are just there for word count or due to an unpolished writting style.

Zayah
ZayahLv15Zayah

I'd delete and rewrite my comment with better grammar and such, but Im on my phone.... so, no.

Ncaak
NcaakLv6Ncaak

It's true that is kinda of repetitive but I don't necesary think that is actually bad when it come to names, as is easy to lose the track of whom is who when is a lot of people involved. But in other things is good suggestion.