Review Detail of DeJeL in Hero Or Else

*Remember, this novel is based on the first five chapters* Constructive Criticism: I would have liked to see more information on why the fire they protected, in the beginning, is so important to them.;,;. Positive Feedback: Good plot, Character builds, and good job making it to where we get a decent amount of information without it seeming like an info dump.;,;. Personal Feedback: I enjoy this novel, I will definitely be eventually continuing it, thanks for the story.;,;.