Up to Chapter 17- This is quite good, and the writing is exceptional that I read all chapters in one sitting. The things lacking- 1) characters are bit lacking 2) little to no excitements and it is quite boring 3) we don't know anything much about the world yet but maybe it would be elaborated more in the future. Overall, good read.
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LIKEThanks for the review! The story's world, characters, and fights etc. Will all be built up over time - one vs one duels now, major battles in the future. Backstories of the characters will also be flushed out :) and there are quite a few "main" characters that have yet to be introduced. I think the story will only improve in those aspects from here on out.