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I think that the prolouge needs to be a lot shorter. It's just too detailed and long for something that will be unimportant for a big part of the novel. It would have been enough if you just wrote about him being very experienced in fighting, a short summary of his life and then the way he died.But that is only the prolouge and the rest(till now) is actually pretty interesting and well written.Even though I sometimes can't picture what the autor is trying to show me.For example I just can not imagine a 6 year old kid playfully punching someones arm who is around 40cm taller than him while he is lying/sitting on his bed and the victim of that gruesome and violent punch is standing in front of him. This review akes it sound like I really hates this novel, but in actuality I'm in love with this novel. While there are things I don't like about this novel they are only minor and the things I like about this novel heavily outweighs what I don't like abou it. For example that the titel actually answers a question which I had in the beginning, or that you can theorise about what is actaually happening, or who these mysterious characters are. Often light novels just do not give you a damn clue till the genius MC finds the answer to the question.

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Hey man, thanks for the review! I've been thinking of ways to make it shorter, but a lot of it is going to be very important to the novel as a whole, it just won't really be obvious why for a while. But if you have any ideas on how to make it shorter while keeping the same information, I'm all ears :)