Review Detail of rubyla in The Outlands

At least there is an attempt at being original, that's miles better than the other novels I've seen here so far. However, the biggest setback is that the author doesn't seem to get that over describing things drags their story down. It makes the chapters tedious to read and the style of the sentences (the length, the formatting of the verb and subject, etc) makes it choppy and not flow. I personally feel that it would be a better story if the author could just cut down a little descriptions. E.g.: "Eyes narrowing, hackles raised, he howled, letting loose a guttural cry" -- even a single one of those would've been enough for us to understand what the author intended, but so many just seems like its bashing us over the head with the imagery.