Item: Punished by his hidden love
Rating: 5
Author: riinflorida

riinfloridaLv116yr

2018-09-06 14:53

That cliffhanger 💔💔💔. Thoughts: The story is great. It's been a while since I read heartbreak and second chances-themed story. Translation Quality: The translation quality is awesome. The errors are non-existent. The writing style is focused on thoughts and emotions with minimal dialogue. I'm giving you a heads up in case this is not your cup of tea. Story Development: The pace of the plot is fast. It's certainly not dragging. It doesn't keep you bored at all. The chapters are fairly short. Character Design: I love the characters 😍😍😍. The FL is relatable. She struggles to move on and not to get stuck on the romance of her past. The ML, although in love with her, is not a lovestruck puppy. The love he has for her is true and sincere. There's also the MC's best friend that supports her all the way. World Background: The setting is on modern China. If you're the type that loves ancient setting and hates modern setting, I can guarantee you that you won't get disgusted with this novel. And that's it. I wish this review is useful to others.

Punished by his hidden love

Baby Piggie

4.7

4928 Chs

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thestatsguyLv11

Nice review

6yr

riinfloridaLv11

Thank you 😊😊😊

thestatsguy:Nice review

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Noodletown_Lv6

haha thank you so much for the in-depth review! We did indeed try very hard to make it 99.9999% error-free haha

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riinfloridaLv11

Thank you 😊😊😊. The compliment flatters me ☺️☺️☺️

Noodletown_:haha thank you so much for the in-depth review! We did indeed try very hard to make it 99.9999% error-free haha

6yr

Noodletown_Lv6

haha yours flatters me too and made all of our hard work worth it

riinflorida:Thank you 😊😊😊. The compliment flatters me ☺️☺️☺️

6yr

rubyjade39Lv11

thank u.

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cessericLv3

Mine have been locked

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Marjor3eLv11

Try something new and unique - The King's Beloved - i recommend it if you like romance fiction, totally not a cliche story

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funmikingLv4

Awesome

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cutiehaidz1990Lv2

Perfect story😘

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cutiehaidz1990Lv2

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cutiehaidz1990Lv2

Nice story

Noodletown_:haha thank you so much for the in-depth review! We did indeed try very hard to make it 99.9999% error-free haha

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Lyds_CaniaberalLv3

😊

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Lyds_CaniaberalLv3

😊

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Lyds_CaniaberalLv3

😊

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