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Division
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The premise: MC tries to blackmail ML into taking over (read: working for) her family’s dying company for free. She stalks him and shamelessly tries to cash in on his raping her, something that she had told him he wouldn’t have to take responsibility for. Now that she’s in the position of weakness, she ignores everything she did in that situation - cutting ties, for one - to pursue her family’s agenda. Oh, and by the way... the ML has superpowers. (This feels like a random add-on that just appears in chapter 16 without any foreshadowing.) This woman is shameless, manipulative, and idiotic, and yet comes off as a shy, helpless girl. Even worse, the ML still loves her. He’s also an idiot. What kind of relationship should he have with a girl he raped? What kind of feelings should he have for a girl who is blackmailing him? He probably only pays attention to her because one of his superpowers only applies to her. (Also known as the plot forcing them together. See: Twilight.) If you like this type of idiotic pairing, please keep reading. Otherwise, kick this trash out of your library.

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Living With a Temperamental Adonis: 99 Proclamations of Love

Ye Fei Ye

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Nitocris
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Gracias 😄😄 por el comentario objetivo, me ahorras el tiempo de empezar para odiarla 😘😘

yslasvyvy1980
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Thank you!! This author writes about the same thing in the 3 books I've tried reading so far... I mean does the author have something against couples who have regular problems... Does beating and raping just make it more exciting or something?? Maybe for some people but I just find it disturbing and discusting.

Sakura_Natsume
Sakura_NatsumeLv5Sakura_Natsume

Wow, that's some strong opinions you have there! 😁😁 But yeah, without reading even a single word of the story, that's exactly what I thought it would contain...😕😑😐 I don't mean to insult Ye Fei Ye or anything, but when I see her name, I steer clear of the novel... which clearly shows how much I dislike the general premise and plotline of her novels...😐😐😐😐 I seriously can't understand the appeal of mutually and self abusive leads who have enough misunderstandings and crazy drama happening to them to travel to the sun and back!😕😕😕😕😒😒😒😒

clupean
clupeanLv5clupean

Thx. I read until the super powers part. I don't want to read anymore, the author is an idiot.

ZarackObama
ZarackObamaLv2ZarackObama

W8 wat? Its not as bad as youre saying it is though

YummyDurian
YummyDurianLv5YummyDurian

Still hilarious 😝

Lady_Lucci
Lady_LucciLv5Lady_Lucci

Tried reading reading this but unfortunately few chapters and I already lost interest. Tried to skip a few chapters to get a "feel" of the story but nothing change, I think that there is something wrong in the head of the male and female lead.

jaraksa
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1. MC doesn’t blackmail ML into taking over her company. The ML is the one playing hard to get to have MC come to him again and again, only signing the contract when she gives up. So she is not manipulative. 2. She’s not having him do it for free. 3. I believe every woman has the right to cut ties with her rapist. 4. She tried other ways to convince him before using the rape card. 5. I read to “His Venom, Her Honey” chapter (don’t know which one but around chapter 60). Cutting ties is the only thing she did to him. 6. The chapter I’m on doesn’t reveal his last “secret”, yet. It does involve the MC but the word the author uses is secret, not superpower. 7. He pays attention to her because they have a history together. One the MC forgets. (Though I doubt if it really is her.) P.S. I’m saying all this to defend the MC, not the author. I don’t agree using rape to spice things up either. I think ML is the one who’s a jerk. There is something wrong with his head.

Mikajona
MikajonaLv6Mikajona

On Which part did she blackmailed him?🤔 And what superpower of his that only applies to her?🤔 Your comment's misleading the readers.. She never blackmailed him.. He has 3 big secrets... The first 2secrets are his 2 superpowers and he can use both to anyone and anytime he wants..the 3rd secret (it's not a superpower)was never mentioned yet but it was his reason to forced himself to forget his feelings to the FL.

ol23
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Yeah I thought I was the only one that noticed the author's writing style, the ML is always at first abusive of the the FL, both emotionally physically and otherwise which is just appalling, and the FL is always weak and helpless 🙄🙄🙄

Asseylum
AsseylumLv4Asseylum

I drop this cause of how persistent the FL are to ML saying only him can save her family empire. It's just didn't make sense to me. Instead pushing him to take the burden of her own family business, why not she instead take it over or search other people to help her? I just don't like how egoist the FL are. Not to mention it seems she's the cutting tie to him when he want to amend his sins.

Cubelios
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Seriously HAHAHAHHA

jaraksa
jaraksaLv5jaraksa

He never tried to amend his sins. He didn’t even apologize! About the company, FL tried to dissuade her father, too. She asked if it could be someone else. But, not knowing what happened between them, the father insisted on being ML because he is successful despite his young age, and the ties between them would make him agree.

Asseylum:I drop this cause of how persistent the FL are to ML saying only him can save her family empire. It's just didn't make sense to me. Instead pushing him to take the burden of her own family business, why not she instead take it over or search other people to help her? I just don't like how egoist the FL are. Not to mention it seems she's the cutting tie to him when he want to amend his sins.
LilyRose30
LilyRose30Lv5LilyRose30

I don't know how this novel will turn out.But I never want to read another Ye Fei Ye's novel again after reading Taking Nation's Husband Home or something. This isn't my cup of tea.

shrry_gurl
shrry_gurlLv5shrry_gurl

You're fucking right. I got sick of the whole plot. I'm out.

mewe
meweLv13mewe

Honestly, I agree. I’ve tried to read this twice and I always drop it within the first 100 chapters because of how painstakingly the relationship between the two is. Their relationship is erratic and inconsistent, almost as if there’s misunderstandings left and right leading to some petty fight between the two. Most would take it as a build up of plot but I can’t handle how awful it is. To think they fall in love after how they treat one another in the beginning is terrible.

Kangaboo
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I don’t like this story either but don’t say things that didn’t happen in your review. You can always keep others off this novel without giving false informations. It seems like you really hate FL novels so why bother reading it?

chimel93
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Thanks op for the sino**is ir saved me time!

40fantasy
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Absolutely! This is also my third book by YFY and I just skipped to the ending since it was basically the same plot albeit the super powers and a incest thing. I’m really disappointed to see an author put in so much effort to enshrine rape and moronic behavior displayed by the FLs in all her books. Even Shi Yao in TBTWY is a moron who is constantly stuffing her face while her ‘friend’ is trying to steal her ‘man or not man’ and it’s up to said man or not man to save their ‘maybe relationship.’ As a woman, I find it very annoying that she keeps making her FL walk with their heads lowered, I mean what the f*** is that! Let wrap this up: if you’re feeling sorry for yourself and feel jumping off the balcony and deleting your sad life then by all means read a YFY novel, she’ll give you a hand. If, on the other hand, you need to pick yourself up and start again, try reading ‘Be My Strength’ or ‘Hidden Marriage’ or any novel that gives you strong characters with some common sense!

yslasvyvy1980:Thank you!! This author writes about the same thing in the 3 books I've tried reading so far... I mean does the author have something against couples who have regular problems... Does beating and raping just make it more exciting or something?? Maybe for some people but I just find it disturbing and discusting.
40fantasy
40fantasyLv1540fantasy

Absolutely! This is also my third book by YFY and I just skipped to the ending since it was basically the same plot albeit the super powers and a incest thing. I’m really disappointed to see an author put in so much effort to enshrine rape and moronic behavior displayed by the FLs in all her books. Even Shi Yao in TBTWY is a moron who is constantly stuffing her face while her ‘friend’ is trying to steal her ‘man or not man’ and it’s up to said man or not man to save their ‘maybe relationship.’ As a woman, I find it very annoying that she keeps making her FL walk with their heads lowered, I mean what the f*** is that! Let wrap this up: if you’re feeling sorry for yourself and feel jumping off the balcony and deleting your sad life then by all means read a YFY novel, she’ll give you a hand. If, on the other hand, you need to pick yourself up and start again, try reading ‘Be My Strength’ or ‘Hidden Marriage’ or any novel that gives you strong characters with some common sense!

yslasvyvy1980:Thank you!! This author writes about the same thing in the 3 books I've tried reading so far... I mean does the author have something against couples who have regular problems... Does beating and raping just make it more exciting or something?? Maybe for some people but I just find it disturbing and discusting.