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iipangii
iipangiiLv56yr
2018-12-07 00:08

I regret to say that I am dropping this novel, which is a pity because I have such high hope in the beginning chapters. But the characters brain-damage actions (most of them) convince me otherwise. First, the grandmother. Grandmother, stop messing with your grandson's love life. I know you want great grandkids but you can't drag every girls in sight and dump them into his lap. And what the heck is telling each of them you love them and won't let the boy mistreat them? The one to mistreat them the most is YOU! If you love someone, would you try to hook her lover WITH ANOTHER GIRL?! Then The immortal grandma. I know you love your disciple and all. But when your disciple fall for a guy with owner, instead of consulting her to stop it, you go everywhere lobbying the guy to break up with his rightful fiancee and go with your disciple?? Do you think your disciple would be happy you force a guy to stay with her? And if the guy willingly go to your disciple, would you really want such an unfaithful guy to be with her? And what is is rant about how he is mistreating your disciple? They were never an item, how can there be mistreatment? Zi Honestly the one I like best. She is annoying as hell but at least she doesn't do the stupid ****. Class Prez (who are no longer one) You should stop the minute you know he has a fiancee. Why do you still stick to him and be doubtful whether he has something with that girl when he is the one to tell you that is his fiancee? Hao Ren You are not a good guy. Decide already, you moron. Decide who you like and come clean. Wait, there is nothing to decide. You know you have to marry Zi, or she dies. And that is also the deal you struck with her parents who was extremely nice to you! So what are you doing acting like that to the other girl and give her hope? You tell her not to go abroad. You hold her hand. You ask her out. You sit beside her on the bus. You are silent when everyone tease that you guys are an item. And then many chapters after that you say you are not her boyfriend?! If this is not lover's behaviors then what is?!!!!

Dragon King's Son-In-Law

Dragon King's Nice Son-In-Law
4.4
791 Chs

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Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv14

Daaamn you're right. I made a review concerning the faults of this novel aswell however I didn't bring up these points even though I noticed these faults aswell. Happy to see fellow person who thinks in a similar fasion. And yeh Zi is the best. As for her parents, if they really suddenly decieded to marry Zi to this unknown fella (mc) then they're stupid. However I feel like the "accident" (mc eating the core) was somehow not a accident since Zi being engaged would take alot off their plates, if my suspusions are correct, then they're not as stupid.

6yr
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NoodleTown
NoodleTownTranslator

Thanks for the review!

6yr
Dae_27
Dae_27Lv4

i did read a spoilers they said in the end he ended up marrying the girls which is annoying 〒_〒

5yr
Asura_666
Asura_666Lv5

Ya i know right. It was better as a single couple

Dae_27:i did read a spoilers they said in the end he ended up marrying the girls which is annoying 〒_〒
5yr
Dae_27
Dae_27Lv4

Ya it also literally like threw the title although he did marry zi its like every powerful cultivators and dragon king's son in law ( TДT)

Asura_666:Ya i know right. It was better as a single couple
5yr
Asura_666
Asura_666Lv5

If it were a single couple novel it would have been great. But he absolutely ruined it by not able to control his heart. There are many novels like this were the protagonist lose to such boring harems due to lack of perseverance.

Dae_27:Ya it also literally like threw the title although he did marry zi its like every powerful cultivators and dragon king's son in law ( TДT)
5yr
1
Asura_666
Asura_666Lv5

Novels like my beautiful and elegant wife

Dae_27:Ya it also literally like threw the title although he did marry zi its like every powerful cultivators and dragon king's son in law ( TДT)
5yr
Dae_27
Dae_27Lv4

that is what im also thinking if he isnt only too softhearted towards su han and Yujia maybe it wouldn't be like that also he married the girls in different realm mortal and dragon even tho the realm is different its still kinda....

Asura_666:If it were a single couple novel it would have been great. But he absolutely ruined it by not able to control his heart. There are many novels like this were the protagonist lose to such boring harems due to lack of perseverance.
5yr
jwkrom
jwkromLv3

I am just getting into the hang of reading this amazing story

5yr
MouseTheCat
MouseTheCatLv5

Mmmm ...

5yr
flamingphoenix1999
flamingphoenix1999Lv2

Amazing story

5yr
TianHa
TianHaLv4

shut up slut

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KilLaRuNa
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..........

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IChaosI
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One day, your just minding your own business and you see a piece of candy and you're like " oh! A piece of candy!" And you eat it because you're a badass who does what they want 😎 little did you know BAM! You're the son-in-law to a dragon now. Does this mean you'll become a dragon too? Will you ever eat candy again? Is your dragon wife at least hot? Find out next time on Dragon ba- oh wait fu-- (cuts off into black screen)

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The only reason I voted for this novel is because thestatsguy returned and gave us information on this novel. I didn't even read the synopsis. Thus, on this day I voted for thestatsguy.

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MushokuTensei
MushokuTenseiLv5

Reveal spoiler

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Clariping
ClaripingLv10

Swallowed a candy that fell from a girl's body? Somehow became the dragon king's son in law? The absurdity and ex-machina vibe actually intrigues me. Experiencing a hidden world, I got the fantasy vibes of Harry Potter and Ancient Magus' Bride... Gonna give this a try.

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Ananya
AnanyaLv11

First Impression of the story:- I read a few chapters and felt that the novel was a decent read. It gave me the vibes of Genius Sword Immortal, My Beautiful Teacher, etc. It looks like the kind of novel where lots of beautiful ladies show up but it beats reading boilerplate novels any day. MC is accidently thrust into a Fantastical world hidden within the real word and tries to cope with these new changes in his life and what happens next forms the rest of the story....

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Ame
AmeLv6

I droped this as soon as I read the kid character being described as sexy. This is pedo bait for lolicons who are into grooming. In fact, I expect the rest of this novel to a bunch of pedo pandering. This is not the kind of content I want to see on webnovel.

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Modsan
ModsanLv4

Let me start off by saying the characters and their relations and how they affect each other is one of the more realistic ones I have ever read in Chinese webnovel. They actually have a character development instead of the author slapping "They felt closer after talking" or "It was a love at first sight". And the supporting cast is not one-dimensional cardboard cutouts, they actually care for each other and you can feel it in the dialogue. The author shows a strong hand of " Show and Not Tell". The other aspect aren't things that would be marveled at but it is still good.

6yr
kanukai
kanukaiLv5

So am I the only person who thinks the MC is stupid. A candy drops from a little girl what do do you do??? Oh i don't know maybe eat it 😕 But the story sound sound interesting anyway

6yr
bob20bob2
bob20bob2Lv6

Just a random and unreasonable Harem hater coming through no big deal Harem sucks- all characters are one dimensional Harem sucks- all characters are one dimensional Harem sucks- all characters are one dimensional Harem sucks- all characters are one dimensional Harem sucks- all characters are one dimensional

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