I droped this as soon as I read the kid character being described as sexy. This is pedo bait for lolicons who are into grooming. In fact, I expect the rest of this novel to a bunch of pedo pandering. This is not the kind of content I want to see on webnovel.
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When she is described as sexy it is talking about how she will look not how she looks at the time. Also the age gap between the the mc and his fiancee may seem big at first but in 5-10 years it wont be that big of a deal. Lots of married people have an age gap of a few years and somtimes more.
its k, just some fine samples of social justice warrior in action
Cloux:When she is described as sexy it is talking about how she will look not how she looks at the time. Also the age gap between the the mc and his fiancee may seem big at first but in 5-10 years it wont be that big of a deal. Lots of married people have an age gap of a few years and somtimes more.
Building a relationship with somebody underage so that you can date them when they get older is grooming, and that goes against my principals, so I stand by my review.
Cloux:When she is described as sexy it is talking about how she will look not how she looks at the time. Also the age gap between the the mc and his fiancee may seem big at first but in 5-10 years it wont be that big of a deal. Lots of married people have an age gap of a few years and somtimes more.
Underage in what country? In some countries you are an ***** by 16 (Scotland for example). In some countries you are an ***** by 21 (Mississippi in the USA for example). How about a 16 years old man date an underage 15 years old girl in Scotland or how about a 16 years old girl from Scotland date a 21 years old man from Mississippi? You see? It isn't always as easy as you think it is, but I basically agree with your principles. There are totally detestable cases, which crossed the line (about 12 year old children, forced marriage and brainwashing) Well, this story isn't about this kind of sh*t. The MC doesn't have any "sexual feelings" for her. You really should read more chapters. His fiancee isn't forced to marry him and the marriage does have some serious reason behind it. Even then the MC thinks about how to avoid the marriage.
Ame:Building a relationship with somebody underage so that you can date them when they get older is grooming, and that goes against my principals, so I stand by my review.
It seems the word a-d-u-l-t is censored? LOL How to replace this word? Grown Ups? :D BTW his fiancee is almost an a-d-u-l-t in Scotland.
ktoffl:Underage in what country? In some countries you are an ***** by 16 (Scotland for example). In some countries you are an ***** by 21 (Mississippi in the USA for example). How about a 16 years old man date an underage 15 years old girl in Scotland or how about a 16 years old girl from Scotland date a 21 years old man from Mississippi? You see? It isn't always as easy as you think it is, but I basically agree with your principles. There are totally detestable cases, which crossed the line (about 12 year old children, forced marriage and brainwashing) Well, this story isn't about this kind of sh*t. The MC doesn't have any "sexual feelings" for her. You really should read more chapters. His fiancee isn't forced to marry him and the marriage does have some serious reason behind it. Even then the MC thinks about how to avoid the marriage.
Stories don't write themselves. The author could have easily made the characters the same age, but he didn't, which speaks lengths about his intent. This is wish fulfilment for sickos who don't want to admit their perversion. "Well, it's okay to groom a child if you're forced to groom a child, right?" Wrong, learn to be honest with yourself. Consume lolicon **** if you want, but personally, I don't want these stories in this community.
ktoffl:Underage in what country? In some countries you are an ***** by 16 (Scotland for example). In some countries you are an ***** by 21 (Mississippi in the USA for example). How about a 16 years old man date an underage 15 years old girl in Scotland or how about a 16 years old girl from Scotland date a 21 years old man from Mississippi? You see? It isn't always as easy as you think it is, but I basically agree with your principles. There are totally detestable cases, which crossed the line (about 12 year old children, forced marriage and brainwashing) Well, this story isn't about this kind of sh*t. The MC doesn't have any "sexual feelings" for her. You really should read more chapters. His fiancee isn't forced to marry him and the marriage does have some serious reason behind it. Even then the MC thinks about how to avoid the marriage.
Yeah, I would also prefer her to be older :D That's because she acts too childish. I would enjoy this story much more with a more mature personality. His fiancee is too bratty, but again nobody is forced to do anything. I suspect you didn't even read properly. The problem is the story wouldn't work out without a time frame until the marriage. So the author decided to make her younger. Let's go back to the story, because you clearly don't know about it. WARNING SPOILER 1) MC is eating her dragon core/ It is her fault 2) If they take out the dragon core from MC's body, he would die with a high probability or barely be alive after taking it out of him 3) She doesn't want him to die. So she decided to take responsibility and marry him in the future. She don't want him to marry, but she don't want him to die either. So she temporarily says she would marry him. 4) MC also don't want to marry her. So he keeps thinking about how to avoid his death and how to give her the dragon core back without the marriage. 5) MC's parents would never agree to the marriage, if she doesn't want the marriage. This doesn't have anything to do with your so called grooming. The story has a completely different context.
Ame:Stories don't write themselves. The author could have easily made the characters the same age, but he didn't, which speaks lengths about his intent. This is wish fulfilment for sickos who don't want to admit their perversion. "Well, it's okay to groom a child if you're forced to groom a child, right?" Wrong, learn to be honest with yourself. Consume lolicon **** if you want, but personally, I don't want these stories in this community.
WARNING SPOILER I forgot to metion. She dies also without her dragon core after a few years. So it is either they take out the dragon core and mc dies or they don't take out the dragon core and she dies or they have a marriage after she is an a-d-u-l-t, so they can share the dragon core.
ktoffl:Yeah, I would also prefer her to be older :D That's because she acts too childish. I would enjoy this story much more with a more mature personality. His fiancee is too bratty, but again nobody is forced to do anything. I suspect you didn't even read properly. The problem is the story wouldn't work out without a time frame until the marriage. So the author decided to make her younger. Let's go back to the story, because you clearly don't know about it. WARNING SPOILER 1) MC is eating her dragon core/ It is her fault 2) If they take out the dragon core from MC's body, he would die with a high probability or barely be alive after taking it out of him 3) She doesn't want him to die. So she decided to take responsibility and marry him in the future. She don't want him to marry, but she don't want him to die either. So she temporarily says she would marry him. 4) MC also don't want to marry her. So he keeps thinking about how to avoid his death and how to give her the dragon core back without the marriage. 5) MC's parents would never agree to the marriage, if she doesn't want the marriage. This doesn't have anything to do with your so called grooming. The story has a completely different context.
OP is just an idiot who didn't read the story....MC only kisses her one time, before she becomes an ***** lol. Even that was only to help her show off at school... In fact I dislike this story, because MC has all these beauties around him, but he's a block of wood.
A.d.u.l.t. idk why thats censored....
Skazz:OP is just an idiot who didn't read the story....MC only kisses her one time, before she becomes an ***** lol. Even that was only to help her show off at school... In fact I dislike this story, because MC has all these beauties around him, but he's a block of wood.
Then you are missing a good read with good character development.
I do agree with most of the previous comments... Ur missing a really great story with REAL CHARACTERS and not just a close up characters and posible love interest without any individuality and growths...
your right the author is a pedophile every romantic scene on this novel is focus on zhao yanzi while character like xie yujia even though always helping the mc are always ignored. . seriously the author is fucking disgusting the way the mc always tolerate the little girl while ignoring the other girls is too much i dropped the novel because of how idiotic the author is
Why man it is a great novel and I think you should try and read it some more.
I know quite a few families with age difference of close to 10 years. I know a few couples with age difference of over 10 years. You think about her as a kid, but you completely ignore the fact that 15 year olds date and have s-e-x already. If they are considered mature enough for that in pretty much every western nation, then getting engaged at that time is all the same. Mc isnt 50, he is 20, 5 years difference is very normal. Ill go as far as to say that i know very few familiers or couples with similar age. The vast majority of wifes are a few years younger than their husbans. That being the case, i have no clue what you are on about.
Ame:Stories don't write themselves. The author could have easily made the characters the same age, but he didn't, which speaks lengths about his intent. This is wish fulfilment for sickos who don't want to admit their perversion. "Well, it's okay to groom a child if you're forced to groom a child, right?" Wrong, learn to be honest with yourself. Consume lolicon **** if you want, but personally, I don't want these stories in this community.
Almost 600 chapters in and she has yet to change that terrible unlikable attitude. I've held the hopes of him getting out that that crappy arranged marriage so he could be with his childhood sweetheart but that seems extremely unlikely.
ktoffl:Yeah, I would also prefer her to be older :D That's because she acts too childish. I would enjoy this story much more with a more mature personality. His fiancee is too bratty, but again nobody is forced to do anything. I suspect you didn't even read properly. The problem is the story wouldn't work out without a time frame until the marriage. So the author decided to make her younger. Let's go back to the story, because you clearly don't know about it. WARNING SPOILER 1) MC is eating her dragon core/ It is her fault 2) If they take out the dragon core from MC's body, he would die with a high probability or barely be alive after taking it out of him 3) She doesn't want him to die. So she decided to take responsibility and marry him in the future. She don't want him to marry, but she don't want him to die either. So she temporarily says she would marry him. 4) MC also don't want to marry her. So he keeps thinking about how to avoid his death and how to give her the dragon core back without the marriage. 5) MC's parents would never agree to the marriage, if she doesn't want the marriage. This doesn't have anything to do with your so called grooming. The story has a completely different context.
Typical reaction of a closed minded, self-righteous person who thinks she/he knows better than everyone else. I hope Webnovel continue to be a site where you can read all kinds of novels, not only politically correct crap.
Didn't expect this review to get so many replies. LMAO at all the people who think you have to be an SJW to call out pedophilia.
Clearly you haven’t read very far. Dude starts full on creeping on her, obsessing over how thin and soft her feet and legs are, getting excited about cutting class so he can go to her school and watch her during P.E., making sexually teasing remarks, playing with th idea of kissing her/more, etc. This is NOT about how she *will* look, this is about her *now*. Beyond that, MULTIPLE characters comment on how they assumed that MC and the little girl being a romantic thing was not a possibility given thier difference in ages, and her age in particular (e.g. his grandma, Class President, the school advisor) Even the main character himself has a moment where he realizes: “wait.. when I was in 8th grade, she was in 3rd... this is f’ing weird...” Even to the logic of the book, this is not anywhere near normal. An age gap is fine. Even the engagement itself is understandable given the circumstances, but what is not is having those kind of thoughts towards a girl who is basically mentally a 11 year old (she’s far less mature than her actual age and it’s specifically pointed out that even at 15 she’s only vaguely aware of sexual matters; meanwhile he’s full on creeping on her at times)... For everyone saying “what’s underage”, in China, where this is taking place, the MINIMUM age for marriage is 22 (males), and 20 (female). It is considered taboo to have a high school sweetheart, and some schools will go as far as to expell kids for it if they are caught. I’ll be honest, I read this being somewhat optimistic, not realizing it was a harem, and then just got slowly more and more grossed out as I realized how many perverted scenes the author was trying to sneak in.
Cloux:When she is described as sexy it is talking about how she will look not how she looks at the time. Also the age gap between the the mc and his fiancee may seem big at first but in 5-10 years it wont be that big of a deal. Lots of married people have an age gap of a few years and somtimes more.
Lol i was planning on reading it untill you daid harem... Harems arent my cup of tea but there will be some exception
Alkiran:Clearly you haven’t read very far. Dude starts full on creeping on her, obsessing over how thin and soft her feet and legs are, getting excited about cutting class so he can go to her school and watch her during P.E., making sexually teasing remarks, playing with th idea of kissing her/more, etc. This is NOT about how she *will* look, this is about her *now*. Beyond that, MULTIPLE characters comment on how they assumed that MC and the little girl being a romantic thing was not a possibility given thier difference in ages, and her age in particular (e.g. his grandma, Class President, the school advisor) Even the main character himself has a moment where he realizes: “wait.. when I was in 8th grade, she was in 3rd... this is f’ing weird...” Even to the logic of the book, this is not anywhere near normal. An age gap is fine. Even the engagement itself is understandable given the circumstances, but what is not is having those kind of thoughts towards a girl who is basically mentally a 11 year old (she’s far less mature than her actual age and it’s specifically pointed out that even at 15 she’s only vaguely aware of sexual matters; meanwhile he’s full on creeping on her at times)... For everyone saying “what’s underage”, in China, where this is taking place, the MINIMUM age for marriage is 22 (males), and 20 (female). It is considered taboo to have a high school sweetheart, and some schools will go as far as to expell kids for it if they are caught. I’ll be honest, I read this being somewhat optimistic, not realizing it was a harem, and then just got slowly more and more grossed out as I realized how many perverted scenes the author was trying to sneak in.
