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iipangii
iipangiiLv56yr
2018-12-06 16:08

I regret to say that I am dropping this novel, which is a pity because I have such high hope in the beginning chapters. But the characters brain-damage actions (most of them) convince me otherwise. First, the grandmother. Grandmother, stop messing with your grandson's love life. I know you want great grandkids but you can't drag every girls in sight and dump them into his lap. And what the heck is telling each of them you love them and won't let the boy mistreat them? The one to mistreat them the most is YOU! If you love someone, would you try to hook her lover WITH ANOTHER GIRL?! Then The immortal grandma. I know you love your disciple and all. But when your disciple fall for a guy with owner, instead of consulting her to stop it, you go everywhere lobbying the guy to break up with his rightful fiancee and go with your disciple?? Do you think your disciple would be happy you force a guy to stay with her? And if the guy willingly go to your disciple, would you really want such an unfaithful guy to be with her? And what is is rant about how he is mistreating your disciple? They were never an item, how can there be mistreatment? Zi Honestly the one I like best. She is annoying as hell but at least she doesn't do the stupid ****. Class Prez (who are no longer one) You should stop the minute you know he has a fiancee. Why do you still stick to him and be doubtful whether he has something with that girl when he is the one to tell you that is his fiancee? Hao Ren You are not a good guy. Decide already, you moron. Decide who you like and come clean. Wait, there is nothing to decide. You know you have to marry Zi, or she dies. And that is also the deal you struck with her parents who was extremely nice to you! So what are you doing acting like that to the other girl and give her hope? You tell her not to go abroad. You hold her hand. You ask her out. You sit beside her on the bus. You are silent when everyone tease that you guys are an item. And then many chapters after that you say you are not her boyfriend?! If this is not lover's behaviors then what is?!!!!

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Passerby_Venne
Passerby_VenneLv14

Daaamn you're right. I made a review concerning the faults of this novel aswell however I didn't bring up these points even though I noticed these faults aswell. Happy to see fellow person who thinks in a similar fasion. And yeh Zi is the best. As for her parents, if they really suddenly decieded to marry Zi to this unknown fella (mc) then they're stupid. However I feel like the "accident" (mc eating the core) was somehow not a accident since Zi being engaged would take alot off their plates, if my suspusions are correct, then they're not as stupid.

NoodleTown
NoodleTownTranslator

Thanks for the review!

Dae_27
Dae_27Lv4

i did read a spoilers they said in the end he ended up marrying the girls which is annoying 〒_〒

Asura_666
Asura_666Lv6

Ya i know right. It was better as a single couple

Dae_27:i did read a spoilers they said in the end he ended up marrying the girls which is annoying 〒_〒
Dae_27
Dae_27Lv4

Ya it also literally like threw the title although he did marry zi its like every powerful cultivators and dragon king's son in law ( TДT)

Asura_666:Ya i know right. It was better as a single couple
Asura_666
Asura_666Lv6

If it were a single couple novel it would have been great. But he absolutely ruined it by not able to control his heart. There are many novels like this were the protagonist lose to such boring harems due to lack of perseverance.

Dae_27:Ya it also literally like threw the title although he did marry zi its like every powerful cultivators and dragon king's son in law ( TДT)
Asura_666
Asura_666Lv6

Novels like my beautiful and elegant wife

Dae_27:Ya it also literally like threw the title although he did marry zi its like every powerful cultivators and dragon king's son in law ( TДT)
Dae_27
Dae_27Lv4

that is what im also thinking if he isnt only too softhearted towards su han and Yujia maybe it wouldn't be like that also he married the girls in different realm mortal and dragon even tho the realm is different its still kinda....

Asura_666:If it were a single couple novel it would have been great. But he absolutely ruined it by not able to control his heart. There are many novels like this were the protagonist lose to such boring harems due to lack of perseverance.
jwkrom
jwkromLv3

I am just getting into the hang of reading this amazing story

MouseTheCat
MouseTheCatLv5

Mmmm ...

flamingphoenix1999
flamingphoenix1999Lv2

Amazing story

TianHa
TianHaLv4

shut up slut

KilLaRuNa
KilLaRuNaLv4

..........

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