I have just completed the raws of this novel. The plot line and story are brilliant. Its worth reading. But I must admit, last 100 chapters of this novel are like a mess. Almost everything happens in these last chapters. You can really feel that the author is rushing to finish this novel as soon as possible. The cultivation level of the MC and his girls skyrocket in these chapters, sometimes even skipping few of the levels directly. There are 3 bed scenes with Su Han, Zi and Yujia respectively. Finally he has 5 women in his harem: Su Han, Zhao Yanzi, Xie Yujia, Lu Linlin and Lu Lili. There is one more, Duan Yao, whose ending is not elaborated as her soul is being protected in the Kunlun Mountain Lamp because she was injured while saving Hao Ren from Xu Ke. It was written in the last chapter that once MC reaches the realm of 8 hearts lotus, he can save her. But it has been 5 years since that incident and he can't say if her soul still has feeling for him. Many characters were not properly developed like: Duan Yao, Zhao Baibai, Lu sisters, Western Queen, Wu Luoxue, Qin Lang, Elder Xingyue, Ye Zilong and many more. Romance between MC and Su Han, Lu sisters and Guan Yao, was also not elaborated. Ending was very abrupt: 5 years later, Hao Ren becomes a world famous architect and inherits Iom Studio. He marries Zi in the East China Sea Dragon Palace and half-a-month later marries Xie Yujia in front of all the mortals. Now another mystery that was unraveled was about Su Han. Her father is a water-system Tianlong and lord of the Dragon Temple. Her mother is the Gold-system Tianlong who successfully robbed 500 years ago. Now about Smart. He is the only son of Shiefie (Phoenix) and Qin Lang (Unicorn). Both of whom are the King of the World. Shiefie is the daughter of the Prisoner. Smart is an Ink-Black Unicorn. He falls in love with Wu Luoxue, who lives a life of mortal but is actually the daughter of Bai Ze, another King of the World. Conclusion was not given to their romance, even in the last chapter. Lu sisters are actually the core disciples of the Western Queen ('The Virgin'), who loves them like daughters and marries them to Hao Ren. Zhao Kuo is the chosen one by heavens. He marries Elder Xingyue in the end. Zhao Hooran is resurrected in the end as the ultimate dragon. Oh, and there is also the Monkey King (Sun Wukong), who becomes the Second brother of Hao Ren. His 'Stick' becomes the life magic weapon of Hao Ren. Although there are short-comings and the ending never feels to be sufficient, this is still a great novel with a lot of scope for a new volume or a good spin-off. Because seriously, the its ending cannot be called a conclusion. The author has 2 other novels, about which I don't have much idea. But it will be welcomed if you can give their summaries and reviews in the comments.
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LIKEoh I also want to add that the later chapters don't have the slice-of-life element that we had initially. I really liked that initial slow-paced plot and those slice-of-life episodes in the chapters. As I said the latter chapters is a mess, too much content.
What about zi? Is hao ren relationship with zi improve?
kryptos:oh I also want to add that the later chapters don't have the slice-of-life element that we had initially. I really liked that initial slow-paced plot and those slice-of-life episodes in the chapters. As I said the latter chapters is a mess, too much content.
Yup, it does. She completely falls for him and takes initiatives to take their relationship a step further. And she is really a jealous type lover who can't see Hao Ren with anyone else, except those she finally accepts (maybe reluctantly). ***Detailed spoilers below*** She takes an initiative of kissing her in the Dragon Palace during Dragon Boat Festival and then when after school break when, Zi's school transfers to a new building, which is just in front of MC's university, she asks her mother to switch to day boarding. After which she introduces Hao Ren to everyone as her bf. And they share kisses after that many a times. Also, once when all of the roommates of MC were out, she insists on staying in his room and asks him to share a bed. There, they cuddle with each other. And finally once, in MC's seaside villa, when she went to stay there, she sneaks out of the Grandma's room during night and gives her first time to Hao Ren.
TrulyYours:What about zi? Is hao ren relationship with zi improve?
Wanderfull really i like the story Becuse od element good.
Interesting
Interesting read
Very interesting I can't wait to finish it.
is there a site where i can read the complete version?(´⊙ω⊙`)
Tianlong = Heavenly dragon Smart = Zhen Congming Prisoner = master and grandfather of Zhen Congming (exact name i don't remember) Successful Robing = passing heavenly tribulation Zhao baibai = little white (which takes a human form of a little girl)
Prisoner = Qiu Niu Shiefie = lady Zhen King of the world = eternal demon king Dragon temple = dragon god shrine Lord of dragon temple = shrine master
So how did the thing with yijia develop? I seriously im not a fun of yujia but im curious.
kryptos:Yup, it does. She completely falls for him and takes initiatives to take their relationship a step further. And she is really a jealous type lover who can't see Hao Ren with anyone else, except those she finally accepts (maybe reluctantly). ***Detailed spoilers below*** She takes an initiative of kissing her in the Dragon Palace during Dragon Boat Festival and then when after school break when, Zi's school transfers to a new building, which is just in front of MC's university, she asks her mother to switch to day boarding. After which she introduces Hao Ren to everyone as her bf. And they share kisses after that many a times. Also, once when all of the roommates of MC were out, she insists on staying in his room and asks him to share a bed. There, they cuddle with each other. And finally once, in MC's seaside villa, when she went to stay there, she sneaks out of the Grandma's room during night and gives her first time to Hao Ren.
So how did the thing with yijia develop? I seriously im not a fun of yujia but im curious.
kryptos:Yup, it does. She completely falls for him and takes initiatives to take their relationship a step further. And she is really a jealous type lover who can't see Hao Ren with anyone else, except those she finally accepts (maybe reluctantly). ***Detailed spoilers below*** She takes an initiative of kissing her in the Dragon Palace during Dragon Boat Festival and then when after school break when, Zi's school transfers to a new building, which is just in front of MC's university, she asks her mother to switch to day boarding. After which she introduces Hao Ren to everyone as her bf. And they share kisses after that many a times. Also, once when all of the roommates of MC were out, she insists on staying in his room and asks him to share a bed. There, they cuddle with each other. And finally once, in MC's seaside villa, when she went to stay there, she sneaks out of the Grandma's room during night and gives her first time to Hao Ren.
Romance between yujia and ren is very natural. Its not like they start doing things abruptly. Their kisses are also very natural. Also Yujia successfully cultivates a pure yin body. So the old grandma teaches her a dual cultivation technique. Obviously she dual cultivates with hao ren and they increase their realms together.
See the post i just replied
richoco_aye_motoo:So how did the thing with yijia develop? I seriously im not a fun of yujia but im curious.
Ok
kryptos:See the post i just replied
Thanks
I guess I should wait for the novel to end before reading the last few chapters because from what you say it seems it's a rollercoaster ride which is enjoyed at a go rather than a small part at a time
😅 I don't think if you can call it a ride. Its just author jotting down events after events to complete everything, all the while tying all the left loose ends. It doesn't feel like a ride at all. Also it has been a while since I finished this novel. I don't remember exactly.
Rajken:I guess I should wait for the novel to end before reading the last few chapters because from what you say it seems it's a rollercoaster ride which is enjoyed at a go rather than a small part at a time
😅 I don't think if you can call it a ride. Its just author jotting down events after events to complete everything, all the while tying all the left loose ends. It doesn't feel like a ride at all. Also it has been a while since I finished this novel. I don't remember exactly.
Rajken:I guess I should wait for the novel to end before reading the last few chapters because from what you say it seems it's a rollercoaster ride which is enjoyed at a go rather than a small part at a time
I love the book but why does hao ren have to end up with two girls i don't understand
