Review Detail of Sicario_1011 in Pokemon : Ash reborn

Item: Pokemon : Ash reborn
Rating: 2.6

Detalhe da revisão

Sicario_1011Lv141dSicario_1011

The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.

Pokemon : Ash reborn

Denzil_Beast

Liked it!

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Respostas2

Lord_AzathothLv4Lord_Azathoth

how?

Sicario_1011Lv14Sicario_1011

The translation is bad you called misty Stephenie, there’s a city called girl city, there’s many mistakes in just one chapter. I recomend you use gramerly it should be able to help some. I’m not gonna do mental gymnastics to understand a fanfic