The more you read this the harder it becomes to read. The author forgets the sequence of events in the mcu, he forgets what he has written in the older chapters, and Mc doesn't do anything but worship Tony stark the entire novel. He can copy ANY ability but he is just worried about what Tony is doing. He gets blown up in a lab, eager to get back to work for Tony, has all these combat skills, still afraid of his own shadow. After he gets all these combat skills he is deathly afraid of a hot redhead? Especially since he is not supposed to know the true depths of her skills. The Mc shows no growth or potential and has no creativity to improve himself with. At some point it just feels like the author is writing the same chapters over and over again. All previous conversations are forgotten and he is reiterating the same thoughts and emotions. As it is right now I don't recommend reading this.
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