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UelUel
UelUelLv41mth
2024-09-14 23:58

So here's what I thought of this book. The story is indeed interesting and unique. Yet the main concept introduced in the synopsis about finding the MC's love at different times shows a bit of a long story in progress. It is barely at the story so far yet. Also, the writing quality is good but it sometimes just goes too narrative or descriptive like it feels to me that it's going over the top to explain some normal event. Also, the POV is in first person which is kinda of a challenge for controlling the sequence of events in the story but it's also enjoyable to read a first person narration. I think the foundation of the story still needs some improvement so keep working and writing, author.

Fate's Bloody Path

Mr_O_
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32 Chs

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Mr_O_
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Good review, I'm interested in receiving comments like this to know what to improve. Thanks!✨

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