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VeilD
VeilDLv42mth
2024-08-18 03:49

I like the premise, its rather fresh. I also look forward to the combat scenes as the first one was great. Keep it up 👍.

The Eternal Emperor

Phantom17
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48 Chs

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For this idea I can't give anything than 5.

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VonBritannia
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sensational. lelouch in star wars is a match made in heavan.

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Dros_Sant
Dros_SantLv13

So far so good as of chapter 5 it’s a incredibley Intresting concept for a Star Wars story. While some of the writing seems to be ai generated most of the time the writing is solid the only complaints I have is the pacing the story is going so fast that we don’t get to see leoluche build up his relationships, reputation and power it’s just told to the reader in a few paragraphs. I hope it was only fast paced at the start to get to the clone wars and it’ll slow done if it does then this story has great potential.

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amir_mohebbi
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more please......................................

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mmkmk
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I like it!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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A_British_Person
A_British_PersonLv13

The concept is rlly interesting and the execution is excellent!! I would definitely recommend this 2 anyone! 5 stars 🌟

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Jarod_Lane_8547
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THIS IDEA IS AMAZING PLEASE DO NOT DROP I BEG OF YOU OH GREAT AUTHOR

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