I am sorry about all the info dumps about the characters' back stories, those characters are important but I would not do it from now on as getting your comments about it, and from now on I would change the story design on giving info in between after the world evolution unless its absolutely necessary not at the start and, the story is gonna get exiting after the evolution so bear with me until then. (Evolution will happen before chapter 60) this is my first time writing so forgive my immature mistake. I WOULD GIVE YOU GUYS SOME JUICY INFO AS THERE IS GONNA BE A TRANSMIGRATOR IN THE FOLLOWING 5 CHAPTERS BEFORE THE EVOLUTION,!!!!
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GOSTARm fine with info dumps but I feel you need to spread it out a bit more and telling people about their background when they just introduced I feel less connected then if you let me get to know the character in the present time before doing that but keep it up I like this book and I think your doing good I have good hopes for you and this book