Review Detail of Veno123 in Pokemon: Unlimited Growth

Item: Pokemon: Unlimited Growth
Rating: 3

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Veno123Lv42mthVeno123

Seems okay so far. A proofreader would definitely increase the rating, the writing is a bit rough. Cant say much about character or story development yet because it has just begun. Looking forward for the future of this fanfic. Keep up the good work author.

Pokemon: Unlimited Growth

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Danger_Zone_69AutorDanger_Zone_69

well I will try and see what can be improved on.

2mth

Mystery_SeerLv2Mystery_Seer

Good! I like your positivity. Even though it is true that the writing is rough, you will get better with practice and it is also brave of you to write even though you could face scorn for your language skills. I am inspired.

Danger_Zone_69:well I will try and see what can be improved on.

1mth