Review Detail of Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212 in Heaven Defying Overlord

Item: Heaven Defying Overlord
Rating: 4.8

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Author I have to say I honestly felt that you should have made chapter2 the first chapter. Chapter 1, is overly descriptive to the point of making it task but read. While chapter 2 on the other hand is presents the making of a beautiful story.

Heaven Defying Overlord

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Chapter 1 is not the beginning of the novel. it is chapter 2 that is the beginning.

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