Review Detail of KS28 in Infinity - The love and vengeance

Please leave a comment or review about my novel. I'm a newbie writer, and I would love to hear your thoughts! What did you like or dislike? How do you feel about the characters, dialogues, and story flow? I want to become a great writer, so please help me by pointing out any flaws and providing constructive feedback. Your input is invaluable for my learning and improvement. Thank you!