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LunaKindredLv33mthLunaKindred

By looking at the synopsis and the storyline, I can tell that this fic will fail. I don't think this fic will be able to reach 100 chapters, even if it can, I'm sure there will be a lot of forced plots or plot holes. Well, good luck

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Arata_SanLv4Arata_San

Thank you for pointing out the weaknesses in my novel. Now, it's clear what I need to pay attention to and improve to make my novel better than before. Although, to be honest, I feel a bit sad and disappointed seeing your low rating :v but anyway, thanks for the advice.

3mth

LunaKindredLv3LunaKindred

The plot is too fast and rushed, making the mc development not optimal. Besides, if the story focuses on world travel instead of hi3, it's better to make the home world in a romcom world or a casual world, because hi3 already has a thick plot.

Arata_San:Thank you for pointing out the weaknesses in my novel. Now, it's clear what I need to pay attention to and improve to make my novel better than before. Although, to be honest, I feel a bit sad and disappointed seeing your low rating :v but anyway, thanks for the advice.

3mth