Review Detail of Strange12Voices in Devils Dungeon

gonna be honest rarely read novels outside of fanfic's cause their free to read, but this one got the potential it lacks grammar, but has a lot of details given to the characters analysis of his surroundings, the character feels more alive and not robotic in his actions as they are explained through his thinking of inner monologue. I recommend making the lines shorter as they can be tedious to read when they are too long also more "," would be needed and sometimes word's are repeating which makes it feel less appealing while reading in rest the novel has high potential it's an unusual take on the blindness of the mc nd his struggles to use the senses and figure things out. if this novel has no system and Harem I will support it as I think it's still a better take on a non human mc than that one rip off of tensura about a guy who became a mimic.